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Twilight princess is my all-time favorite, I think i played through it at least 4 times from beginning to end!!
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Max was excited, and he had two reasons to be. First of all, Aunt Elizabeth had asked him how he would like the library to be re-organized. He had, after thinking about it all night, answered that he wanted his bed on the wall opposite to the window. Then he decided that the big table would have to be pushed under the window for now, while the couch would be at the foot of his bed. A few shelves on the ground floor would also be emptied to he could put away his clothes. His aunt had called a tea
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Max was in a crystal ball, he could see the world outside through a think layer of glass. People would be so deformed that they would look like monsters, and he could not tell whether it was day or night. Worse of all, the ball spun on itself, making him sick. He was crying, and calling out for help. Suddenly a shape stayed in focus, it wouldn't move, it would always be in front of him. He extended his hand towards the shape, and the shape came to meet his hand. Suddenly the ball shattered to sn
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Chapter 1 - The childhood years
dianjin commented on dianjin's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The childhood years
Ooooh thank you! ^.^means a lot to me -
"I can understand why you come here often, it's really beautiful!" The two boys were lounged on the library's sofa. The late-afternoon sun shone through the window, and the forest was as alive as ever. Max had his head resting on Aaron's chest, and what he heard filled him with inexplicable joy: the sound of Aaron's heart beating rhythmically. He enjoyed the life he heard while Aaron slowly stroked his hair. For the first time in a long, long time, he felt at peace, he didn't have to fight his
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Maximilian stormed off to class. Aaron had made him late to class... He was angry at him, why couldn't Aaron be like everyone else? Why couldn't he understand that he didn't want anyone in his life? It infuriated him that he had broken up in front of another person. However, as much as he wanted him to disappear forever, a part of him wanted him to stay. A part of him hadn't returned behind the ice. One petty emotion had escaped his relentlessness watch. One emotion had hid during his breakdo
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Even after two weeks, Aaron still didn't leave Maximilian alone. He should get a medal for being this persistent. At least, Maximilian didn't have to go through the morning and evening commutes with him anymore. Most mornings, Aaron waited for Maximilian in the school parking lot. They went to class together, to Maximilian's great despair, people even started looking at the in the halls. It was probably hilarious to see a small, dark-haired boy walking with a tall, lean blond boy, mostly when th
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Maximilian slammed the front door. "People are so annoying! Why can't they leave me alone!" he thought. He had had such a horrible day at school. Not that his classes and schedule were bad or anything, but this new guy had ALL his damn classes with him. But that's not the best part, because he is kinda cute, with his beautiful brown eyes and short blond hair, the best part is he talks A LOT. He talks non stop, he can never stop talking. "Why me?!" he said aloud in a dramatic tone. The day h
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Chapter 3 - Summer thoughts
dianjin commented on dianjin's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Summer thoughts
Thank you for the kind words I haven't found the time this WE to wright but promise tomorrow it will be in! (though with the approval you might only see it on Tuesday, sorry about that ><) -
Maximilian saw his phone vibrate on the library's table next to him, it was a text from his aunt, away on business as usual. "Don't forget to put your alarm clock on. I don't want to be bothered by your school tomorrow." Another summer had passed in the library. Tomorrow was the first day of his before-last year in high-school. High-school was very different. For starters, the sheer number of students made it so much easier for him to stay hidden, to disappear. When he first had started as a f
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Chapter 2 - The middle-school years
dianjin commented on dianjin's story chapter in Chapter 2 - The middle-school years
Thank you for you kind words I would love to give you some answers but sadly if I did it probably would spoil the rest of the story -
"What a strange boy..." how many times had Maximilian heard that? At least once a week, every week of every year of middle-school. Sometimes it wouldn't be "boy" but the idea was the same. Teachers still tried to open him up, crack the shell that he had put in place around him. Some students would also try, from time to time, to become his friend. This in a way baffled Maximilian, as he was doing his best to be ignored. He tried so very hard to pass unnoticed, and his efforts payed out. He becam
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Tanks for the review! Sorry for the tenses English is my second language, my Rench is probably showing (as we switch "time" (that's what its called in French) often)
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Before he could read, Maximilian spent his days immobile, devoid of any emotion. He would look while not really seeing, listen while not really hearing, touching while not feeling. He would stay like that four hours, he would always be in a dark corner of the rooms at school, his gaze locked on some place infinitely far away. Most kids started to avoid him, they were afraid of the boy with the cold, blue eyes, they were uncomfortable around him. They avoided the short boy with hair as dark as ni
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Eat, walk, work, read, sleep. The four actions that defined 17 year-old Maximilian. You could even say that most of the time, he was on auto-pilot, never really thinking, never really feeling. Friends? What a strange concept that is... Maximilian had had only one friend in all of his young life, and even him had left him. With each passing year the memory of that boy faded away, destined to be forgotten. Maximilian wasn't a bad person, he wasn't mean, far from it! Deep down he had a pure heart,
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Ice, the best barrier one could hope for.
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So many games to choose from.... I'd say my favorites are: Heroes of Might and Magic Sims/simcity Sonic the hedgehog Age of Mythology Legend of Zelda The elder scrolls So many more but I'll keep it to that for now
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I can't wait either, did you try the Hyrule Warriors on Wii U, a friend of mine had it and it is tons of fun
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Ok I feel like an intruder here (a bit ) but if you guys really like strategy games I can maybe recommend a few. I personally love RTSs as much as MOBAs or RPGs or MMOs. I have a lot of fun on them too! I mean some evenings after class all I want is to relax, and you can't with live games like Diablo or LoL. On those evenings I go play Civ 5, I really like the whole aspect of the game. But I know of another series called Heroes of Might and Magic. It is very different from Civ V as it's magical (aangels, demons, necromancers, wizards, orcs, dwarfs, elves etc...), and the point of the game is very different. Still it is still strategy based. It also has a lot of experience (franchise started in 1990), but I don't recommend the latest one ( MMH 6 ) as they changed too many things compared to the old ones (I'm not saying it's bad, just too different for me) If you have time give the 5th a go, it's really worth your time (I think ). If you want the best one of the 6 though it probably is the 3rd... Have a good day
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Love the story, it would be a shame if it were to stop now >< I love your style and the plot looks really promising
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All In Extra--Brad's Demise
dianjin commented on craftingmom's story chapter in All In Extra--Brad's Demise
Aaaaah I've been waiting for this for some time now I would have added a few bullets just for safe measures though!! Kidding was a wonderful story thank you! -
I saw this "challenge" on Facebook, every day one word to use as a prompt for creative activities. Some of my friends paint, some draw, others compose. I chose to write. Where I live, France, has just been put back under lock-down for this month, so this will help pass the time
