TheBlackDragon

Sure I will! it make sense too

@Krista, It's a book idea, that is why I am eager for reviews. I am not a native speaker and it makes me rather nervous. I am always seeking to improve my writing skills and my beta reading and proofreading skills.

it doesn't make sense when you put a story and you work it out but then people read without leaving a comment. Even a bad one, I wouldn't be left with nothing to work on. Is the idea attracting the audiance? Is the idea need something to spice it up? Maybe I should make it rated. Maybe I should add some blood Maybe I should change the whole concept. Maybe I should go on with it. this is why I want reviews. I need answers! I need to answer myself. I need to find this story's voice.

I loved it

Of course I did. It's something we can relate to, to be honest, and I love such stories. Keep going sweetheart I am eager to read the resst. Your style is simple and clean too!

I truly loved it. It's describe me when I first got in middle school to be honest.

The fact you added some French words to the poem added some musicality (since I did read them in French) I love the sweet kind of subtleness in the words. I'd love to see more from you