Uncle Bob

I LOVE this story ❤️

Hey Comsie. I just found this terrific story. Well, at least the first chapter. I would LOVE to read more of this. I see it’s been a few years. Maybe you forgot about it? Update: I just found 8 chapters of this great story in another section of this site, which made me really happy. Unfortunately....the story is unfinished. I’d love to know what happens with Donnie and Austin, and Donnie and Caleb.

A beautiful story. Thank you.

MrM, I'm so glad you added a comment here. It gives me the opportunity to praise your "Brandon Smiles" series. I absolutely LOVE it! A great companion story to Comsie's "Secret Life of Billy Chase". And, you write so well! I'm looking forward to reading more chapters. You are definitely on MY radar. I too am hooked on this genre (Gay-romance-teen) ever since I read my first Comicality story, which was "Billy Chase". And since have read everything Comsie has written, and more than once. It is he most of all that I compare my own writing with. I DO realize that Comsie has over 10 years experience, whereas I have written one story, so I'm trying not to be so hard on myself. What I found cathartic, was not so much reading the stories, but actually writing one. It was then that I was able to express with my own heart "what might have been".

Comsie, thank you so much for the review. I'm sure there are more glaring problems with this story than what you mentioned. What can I say? I gave it a shot. Never thought I would write something like this. In defense of the secondary characters issue, I left them behind in elementary school and should have handled that better. I'm learning... I hope that anyone who reads this story of mine will get some enjoyment from it. All comments are welcome. Hugs to everyone! - Uncle Bob