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---Teddy--- With every day that passes Ryder finds newer and better ways to make me proud, but I swear to god it’s going to take something monumental to exceed tonight. Sitting next to Mrs. Sullivan, seeing the emotion and connection they shared, it blew me away. If he loves his grandma that much, if she means that much to him, well I can’t wait to see him adopt kids. I can’t wait to start a family with him. He’s going to be an amazing father. I just know it. The rest of the concert wa
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Hopefully I can clear up with what we meant, because on second look it is a little confusing. I think what me and @Blanno are trying to say is that there are times when people absolutely should stand up up and say something, but at the same time it sucks when someone stands up for you when you're just messing around with friends. IMO a lot of it has to do with reading the situation. In this situation Blanno's classmate's heart is in the right place, but I think if he watched for a little longer he would see it was all in good fun. It can be a little weird, but standing up for one another is still really important.
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For the record I was WWS level 5 when writing this. Glad we finally have a scale!
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---Ryder--- It’s been a month since I’ve been home. A month of different cities, different crowds, different everything! And yet, no matter where I went, no matter how hard I searched I never found a smile as perfect as his. One that spoke a thousand words without actually saying a single thing. I’d stay up every night in a plane for the rest of my life if it means he’ll be on the other side. I’d do anything for him, and I pray he’d do the same. As the game wound down and we stood outs
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Neither am I, but hopefully one day! That's definitely advised. I think @mogwhy reviewed it perfectly by calling it "Soul-Bruising". It's certainly one hell of a ride.
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Yeah in this story it's more implied. I've never written a true full sex scene into my stories, but I do understand it holds a certain power to it. I mean sex kicks a relationship up a notch. Obviously it's sex, but it can also show an increase of trust and love. It might be a tool I begin to use more as I grow as a writer, but for now we'll see where it goes.
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I'm so glad you can take that away from this story. It's amazing how much just listening to someone can help. I think we all need to know we have people there for us.
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Exactly, and I respect if someone's offended by the word, it can be completely hateful and a terrible weapon (I.E. the way it was used against Ryder in highschool). Or it, in a twisted way, can be a show of love. Kind of an ironic this is is what I am, and I'm embracing it. Plus, in my experience, my friends that call me faggot every now and then are way more comfortable with my sexuality and with hearing about my love life. It was nice of the classmate to stand up for you, but like you said it's not really their place. It makes me smile to hear that people are willing to take a stand, but sometimes you have to read the situation and see how it's going.
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Missing your bus for a chapter is true dedication, I just hope you're somewhere warm!
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---Teddy--- There are moments in life that take your breath way. Moments you know you’ll always remember. Moment’s that you’ll always cherish. Standing up on that stage with Messiah, well I know nothing in my life could ever top it. And as sad as it was for me to hear my boyfriend talk about taking his own life. About being so sad that he saw no other way out. Well when I look out at all those young teens in the crowd, I couldn’t be more proud of the icon he was becoming. If he could get th
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---Teddy--- The passing weeks were hard. I tried my hardest to throw myself into lacrosse and student government, but school still hadn’t started yet, and the summer season had ended. Every now and again I would hang out with Blake and Liz, but ever since I found out they were dating it just hasn’t been the same. Worst of all seeing their whispers and held hands, it made me miss Ryder even more. Face times were good, but it’s not the same as having him here with me, as being able to hold him
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I agree. I may be the one writing it, but I still love finally seeing some sort of calmness for them. Just a moment where they finally get to be a couple again. I hope you enjoyed the Jersey Shore. Being a Jersey boy myself, well Teddy's words are true, it's just a weird thing we all love. I have so many memories going down with friends and family, and hope I'll make many more in my life. Hopefully this chapter reminded you of some good times.
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---Teddy--- It’s amazing how much can change in three months. All I used to care about was popularity. All Ryder used to care about was music. And now look at us. It’s like we’ve finally started growing into the people we’re supposed to be. Like this whole time we just needed one another to help us discover who we really are. I’ve grown so much since he first slammed a door in my face, and I wouldn’t have it any other way. “So marriage,” Liz quietly let out as Blake rushed out back to
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Living in Hawaii must have been really cool! It's one of the places I really want to go explore one day. Jersey shore food is pure greasy garbage, it's basically carnival food except even worse for you! Yet, much like Ryder I love it!
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I was thinking the same thing when I was proof reading it! Of course I would have never wanted his childhood, but to be able to experience all these things as new must be cool. Like when people see snow for the first time as adults. (Although snow is a terrible curse when you have to deal with it all winter!)
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I think because of how straightforward it was. Don't worry though, the upcoming chapters start to get long!
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I figured we all needed a a nice little break from all the chaos
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---Teddy--- I couldn’t help but exhale a deep breath of relief as I watched Mrs. Sullivan hold her grandson. Out of all the good and bad I’ve seen from him, today was probably the hardest moment our relationship has ever seen. Watching him lay in bed all day, surrounded by nothing but hopelessness, it killed me inside. Yet He survived it. We survived it. We can take anything. Now I know we can. We stayed outside for a little bit longer as Ryder clutched onto his deep red guitar. An in
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Absolutely, for the first time in his life his past won't be haunting him.
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This is the first chapter I teared up writing since the first story I wrote. Have a feeling it won't be the last time writing the spotlight does it to me either. Happy to see the emotions came through. Also didn't help that as I was writing it Wish You Were Here came on. Out of all the songs I have saved on my spotify it blew me away that that one came on.
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---Ryder--- I could hear his breathing from across the room, but refused to look over to him. It’s been hours since he got here, and yet, he hasn’t moved from that seat. Why? What does he see in me? There’s nothing in here but disappointment and anger. He must be even more delusional than me to not see that. Wave after wave of hopelessness and despair ran through my mind as I thought about him. Like the ocean crashing onto the shore my mind kept hammering me, desperately trying to get
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Haha only runs deeper from here! I'll probably delay next chapter until tomorrow night to let this one sink in and sit for a while.
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Hey Blanno, I just want to give you one last warning about this story. It's a pretty rough tragedy. I'm glad you seem to be enjoying it, but make sure you brace for impact if you continue it!
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It's funny, how much damage we can accidentally do when we think we're protecting our loved ones.
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Hopefully I didn't overwhelm you guys! I just like having the two chapters back to back to see how they've both grown, and how they have their own unique ways of taking care of one another.
