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    The Divison

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    If it helps Harry is roughly ten years younger than his brother. It was his brother who showed him the music he now loves.
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    I’d never seen anything like the darkness of that night. It seemed like the night was feeding off the pain in his words. As if the gravestones surrounding us were merely taunting what he had said. I looked up to the sky, hoping to see maybe a handful of stars, but the nearby New York City lights made sure to shine bright enough to take them away without actually supplying us any light. Ryder slowly pulled away from me and crawled forward slightly. He almost blended in with the darkness. It was l
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    -----------------------------------------------------------------Teddy----------------------------------------------------------------- It’s amazing how just one hug could captivate so many people. Staring, whispering, conspiring. What kind of world do we live in when one hug draws more attention than a punch? I mean, I get it, no one really expects me to give Ryder any type of attention, let alone a hug, and we are the only known gay kids in school, but still, you’d think we were what ever
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    All for One

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    -------------------------------------------------------------Teddy--------------------------------------------------------------------- Can’t time just stand still for a little while? Can’t we just lay here together? Sure he’ll still be around tomorrow, and the day after that, but how long until his career takes off? His E.P. isn’t even out yet, but he’s already getting offers to play concerts. I know he said his spot isn’t certain, but if I know anything about my uncle, it’s that he
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    What Could Be

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    The good news is that in the Rock scene, even a fast ascension into stardom can take a while. The two may have a good amount of time left to build their foundation, but who knows, these two seem to overthink everything that comes their way.
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    -----------------------------------------------------------------RYDER------------------------------------------------------------ Maybe it’s how much I like Teddy, maybe it’s the confidence I’m getting from this E.P., or maybe I’m just tired of being alone. I’m not sure what it is, but it’s been a long time since I’ve been this friendly. I mean sure, when Mike was here I wasn’t exactly ‘friendly’; but I helped Liz, I joked around with them, I even sang for them. That’s how you become
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    Summers almost over, and with it comes the school year, but more importantly more time to write! So get ready for more chapters on a lot better schedule! I also have to give a huge shout out to JayT for getting this chapter edited so fast, if you haven't noticed, it's a long one! *Okay now to get serious for a bit. I think I wrote this in the head of another chapter, but I'll definitely write it in the story's description. This story will include conversations about/examples of mental
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    Words Unspoken

    Aceinthehole commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Words Unspoken

    Haha guys, you've got the wrong story, this ones Ryder .
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    -------------------------------------------------------------RYDER--------------------------------------------------------------------- I felt one last deep breath escape from my lips as I realized I could actually take Teddy seriously. I don’t understand him. I don’t understand what he has to gain from hanging around me; I’ll only drag him down. I mean, how long until they turn on him? Even if he doesn’t stand up for me every chance he has, they’re still going to wonder why he keeps turning
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    This chapter, and the rest of the story is dedicated to Chester Bennington of Linkin Park, who tragically took his life late last week. It sounds cliche, but growing up Chester inspired me to grow into who I'm becoming today. He wrote with hope, and emotion. Most importantly, his lyrics and music had a feeling of comfort among them. He undoubtedly was one of the first singers that came to mind when I was designing Ryder. Without him, I don't know if I'd be a writer, I don't know if I'd be into t
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    My summer's been great, just a tad bit more busy than I expected! Somehow sudden 11 or 12 hour work days have been sneaking up on me, but I love my job so I can't complain! I hope everything is good on your end! Hope you're relaxing and kicking back as much as possible!
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    Thank you, that is one of the best compliments I can receive. I love to keep things real, and luckily I have an editor who is great at keeping to that! I wish I could get you guys chapters at a higher pace, but things have been a bit crazy this summer (in a good way!), and I'm a strong believer in not doing something unless I can give it my all. You guys deserve the best chapters I can write.
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    No matter what changes in my life, I don’t think I’ll ever get tired of being the popular kid. Even as I approached the field from the parking lot I could hear my name ringing out. It could be anyone from the average student just looking to say ‘hi’, all the way to other varsity athletes, yet today it was much more than just one varsity athlete, today Mike had led the whole baseball team onto the sidelines, and they were making sure I knew it. “Teddy!” I heard a few of them call out as Mike
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    There's more on the horizon, but for now Riley needs time to recover in rehab
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    ~~ PART II~~ | Riley | When I think back on it all, when I take the time to truly look back on my life…well who the hell am I? I went from selling drugs and holding people at gun point to living happily ever after? Who the fuck am I to get happily ever after? Just because I saved one person I deserve a life time of happiness? What about all the wrong I’ve done? All the people I’ve hurt? What about the thoughts that keep haunting me? It’s been a month, and yet, they’re still here. What if
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    My whole life, I’ve been told I bite off more than I can chew. Yet, every single time I prove nothing is too much for me. I prove no matter how big or how small, I can pull it out in the end. From popularity, to sports, to student government, to grades, and yet here I sit staring at the boy with a green stripe in his hair, not sure what to say! He came over just like we had planned, but all he’s done is just sit there. When I ask something, I get slight nods or ‘okays’. It’s like he’s a zomb
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    They say the brighter the star, the shorter the life. The more I see from Ryder, the more I get the feeling he’s going to be the brightest star music has seen in a long time. I just hope that old saying is about the stars up in the sky, not the ones here on Earth. “Teddy!” My uncle’s voice boomed through the phone. “You have to get here ASAP. This kid’s a nut job!” “What?” I laughed, shooting my dad a weird look as he tried to listen in on the conversation. “What do you mean ‘nut job’?”
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    It's very true no one thing directly causes depression, but keep in mind depression can occur in people even if it doesn't occur in their families. Its a form of learned hopelessness and while rare, can basically lead to learned depression from constant failure.
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    Do you know those days when you see something you’ll never forget? Those days you’ll remember in five years and wish you could go back just for few minutes? Those days when you see something that completely blows your mind? Those days when you know things will never be the same again? Seeing the huge crowd roaming towards the old barn, well I couldn’t help but know that feeling was coming. This wasn’t like the crowd from the past two weeks. No, this crowd was massive. The people were decked
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    Beauty is in the eye of the beholder
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    Thanks for the heads up! It's fixed! I'm glad you liked it! I'm really happy this went over well, I was worried it would reopen scars for people. Haha of course he had to play for the devils...I just wish we had a player like him!
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    A year ago I started my journey as a writer here on GA. It's been a long one, but I don't regret a single word I've written. For a while now I've been planning some type of bonus chapter for Velocity's anniversary but went back and forth on if I should even release one. That is, until I spoke about it with my new editor, who came up with the idea of a chapter from adult Eli's perspective. I hope this can bring as much closure to those of you who wanted it, as it did for me. *Disclaimer: Th
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    Thank you! your tweaks have been great! Not to mention your idea for a bonus chapter on an older story...but people will just have to wait and see what that is
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    As I walked back in from the gate, I got hoots and stares from my relatives. Something tells me they saw me looking at him one too many times. But, I mean we are just friends, and sometimes it doesn’t even feel like that! Do I have a crush on him? I guess…but there’s no way he has feelings back…and there’s no way he’ll ever get them. In his eyes, we’re just too different…in his eyes, I’ll always be predictable…I’ll always be boring. “Teddy’s got a boyfriend! Teddy’s got a boyfriend!” one o
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