charlie lytle
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Wow!!!! That was a great example of communication. Gotta love Miss Julie. I am glad the "separation" didn't drag out for a long time as it hurt just as a reader. Looking forward to what happens in chapters to come how things go in Chicago.
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I also know it takes time to be as creative ad you are with your writing. I have just gotten out of the hospital after my second knee replacement and I eagerly look forward to your next posting. It is a great way to relax after my physical therapy
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Hopefully this is just another bump in the road. Paul wants to run. But hopefully Jeff will find a way to corner him to talk it out. Paul will need to work on his verbal communication skills.
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When do we get chapter 29? I am going through withdrawal!!
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Great writing. It show the complexity of relationships.
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Very enjoyable but I missed Jeff and Paul. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Enjoyed the chapter. It set the early expectations of the trip to Chicago, the private jet, the clothing they are taking and even what will be happening to princess. Also enjoy hearing Paul's acceptance of the ways in which his life is rapidly changing, yet with a little resistance.
