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sojourn last won the day on December 31 2020

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  1. You make this all so easy to accept. The analytical approach that provides insights as to the operations of and the brain’s role in enabling psychic powers leaves open the possibility that all humans could become perhaps level IIs. Imagine a world in which politicians and priests could not tell a lie, heavenly. As our intrepid duo kept helping a very “clinical” Bart, I kept hearing that old adage, “no good deed goes unpunished”. thanks again DaddyDaveK for sharing your talents and such a great tale. Jim
  2. I love science fiction. Even bad sci-fi is entertaining if the story line is "believable". This story beginning is well crafted and more importantly is told in a way that one can almost accept telepathy and telekinesis as we see it evolve in Able III. The description of the ship was also at a level that I could conceptualize. All that "ease of understanding" of the major elements of the setting in a story are critical to my enjoyment. As I said, "I love Science Fiction." This is well beyond most sci-fi / fantasy stories I have begun on other gay fiction tales, on GA or elsewhere. This I get i
  3. I like the way this is developing. I feel like the foundation has been built so that there are no expectations as to what I knew regarding telepathy or telekinesis in this universe. I didn’t really want to take away from my reading to post this comment but I had the best of intentions to write after each chapter but I was too eager to continue with Able III and his adventure. great story, Jim
  4. I thought, and said as much that the ending of the previous chapter completed a well crafted and enjoyable tale. Who am I to look a gift horse in the mouth. I love this story! WAHOO!!! WRITE FASTER. POST SOONER. Jim
  5. Well, I was right about Arby’s grandpa but never considered it was a tribe. Great story. Thanks so much for sharing your talent. Jim
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    Catchphrase

    Bittersweet: can be defined as a time when the truth and apologies are not enough to ease the hurt even if the hurt was unintentional. This could serve as an example that using hurtful, hate-filled words can have unintended and sometimes life-altering consequences. “Use with caution”
  7. Donovan's life makes me think of kismet and karma getting into a pissing contest and this poor guy just keeps getting wet. I am enjoying this story as much as I enjoyed "Boss Nanny". These are the kind of tales that brought me to GA and the kind I most enjoy. There comes a time in a movie or a book where I find myself guessing what happens... This is one of those moments. Is it tacky of me to say aloud that Arby's grandfather is Mr. Neighbor? I think this kind of speculation is proof positive that a reader is committed to and is enjoying the story. Write faster. Post
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    Boss Nanny

    There are 14 chapters posted and it says in progress. At this point, it seems a completely satisfying tale with great characters, plot, subplot, and pacing that makes one click on the next chapter in eager anticipation. This story has made me reach for another of of this writer’s tales. Can’t imagine more chapters will make it better but I will be checking, just in case.
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    Chapter 44

    Thank you, not sure the search engine knows my stories are even posted. Thanks again, covid has led me to revisit some old favorite stories. Jim
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    chapter seventeen

    A lot of folks missed a few of my comments like that one. You have a keen eye for detail. jim
  11. Maria has a huge fan base. Lots of folks notice more than the lead characters. I know she would be offended if she thought she wasn’t as important as anyone else. thanks for commenting jim
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    Chapter 27

    I agree with all you said. I try to keep my morals in my bedroom only. What consenting adults do or do not do is no concern of mine unless I am invited to join them. thanks again for your comments jim
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    Chapter 30

    Thanks so much for your comments. It feels good when my storyline draws a reader into my character’s world. Jim
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    Chapter twenty

    I enjoy hearing that my work gets folks involved with the characters and the story. Thanks so much for commenting. Jim
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    Chapter 6

    I hope the other site was Nifty.org I have posted no where else. Recently I started re reading some of my favorite stories, not mine, and find I enjoy them even though I have a general idea as to plot line but the stories are just as engaging. (GA has my stories with the most thorough editing.) Thanks for letting me know. Jim
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