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Sorry for the time I took to vote, but the new GA site doesn't send me forum updates'

Love the new chapter of wild life! The meeting between Ben and William was almost like I would have imagined it Thanks for writing! Andre'

sorry for you laptop. Those tiny things get broken too often. Glad about chapter 3 though

Sorry to nag, but, well, it's been a month... any news about chapter 3?

I am damn glad you're alive. Armenia, Georgia, and some of the others ex USSR countries have become black holes. And the Bush administration is sending huge amounts of money there, supposedly to contain Russia, while letting a whole new level o gangster organizations gain powers. Well, have a nice trip back :-)

so he's the pitcher, uh?

well, in Dirty Basement Ben's sword slices in half a fireball coming out a giant frog's mouth (what could come out of a frog's diet?!) so I just presumed it was our almost-naked hero coming to rescue. Sort of

Finally! I found the new chapter showing more about magic and about William's magic: am I wrong or he has a special way of dealing with it, as someway "Coming home" reveals? And... Ben cut in half a FIRE BALL with his sword? Because it was Ben's who did it, wasn't it? ...another month waiting, uhmpf.

The brevity of the chapter (how could you fit a whole griphon in just 3k? ) is what's most disappointing of it. Though William did not look much like a ass of a stupid prince as one could have thought reading university staff's comment in "Coming Home"...

Thank you for this first chapter! loved this beginning

That was FUN! Just finished reading your new story and firegrass. I do love them and I hope "Wild life" will soon be posted

Uhm... this might sound rude, but as a reader -and a Opera user- when I am reading something online I usually switch to "user mode" that is a Times N Roman black with a light gray background and zoom to 180% the screen It just lets me put my feet on the table and relax on the chair while reading the story...

Chapter 9 is veeeery good Though Richard is someway stereotyped: he acts as we could think a monodimensional perv parents would, no deep in him; well, he's just a perv after all. Great story, as always with you :-)

Ciao Tiffany I was just suggesting your story yesterday as a nice college-themed novel. Nice to see you here

as a reader what catches my eyes is the plot: how deep are the character involved in it, how credible are them and what is happening around them and to them, how I got involved to the point of waiting for a new chapter -or to finish a book-. The characterization is also important: the feelings involved, how the emotions are shown and depicted. Sex, for me, is a big turn off: I usually skip the graphic descriptions and well, it is someway boring reading in each and every chapter the same stuff happening :_)