I have received the following message from the site admin, and as I have written most of the story already, it would be very difficult to comply with the request without restarting from scratch. I also am not particularly motivated to write stuff that interests no-one except the administrator, so I will look for an alternative site to post the story.
So sorry, but thanks for all the kind comments so far.
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"I've approved your first 4 chapters, but so far most of the content has been about sex. You need to balance the sex to plot beyond the sex. Coming out and coming of age for those years is about much more than just having sex with different people. Beyond that, people have lives and daily events with friends, family, etc... that occur that can be written about that all show character evolution and maturation that would balance the sex scenes. Please make sure you follow GA's guidelines of not posting more than 50% sex scenes in future chapters or I won't be able to continue to approve further content.
Respectfully,
Cia
Site Admin"