Basically all your work is really amazing Razor. The best though is probably Rave Boy, mainly 'cause Jon is one of the best written characters I've seen in a long time, and Joey's very cool too. Besides the main two, I love Mary Lou and her cat. I've never met a redneck psychic, but I used to work as a tarot reader and every time she appears it reminds me of the people that came to me all the time for relationship advice. Really love it. Basically, your characters are real in Rave Boy, and it makes them great.
I'm finding myself really loving your portrayal of anorexia in Ana though, which I didn't think I would because of the nature of the topic, but you've really captured it beautifully.
My advice: keep your focus on your characters like you have been in these two. They're really well-written.
Also, this is my first post ever to gayauthors.org and it was Rave Boy that led me here. Thanks for writing great stuff. Cheers!