Xiamise

Damn you! I love you! Damn you! I love you.... Now I can look forward to another few months of exquisite angst for Davey.... Why did Davey have to open that ancient fortune cookie and read that cursed strip of paper? "May you re-live interesting times." Cheers and well done!

Chapter 17 is now posted at IOMFATS (as of 1-22-05). Another triumph!

I just finished reading chaper 16 (posted this week) and I was blown away. Thank you for the heads up on this one!!!

Dan, While I am stunned by this story and it's charactors, and selfishly happy that I can look forward to reading the new chapters over the next couple of days. I also hope that you will be able to take some time out and enjoy some cheer with those you care about durring the holidays. Blessed be

I am treating the jargon like any other sci-fi story (think Star Trek and all of the technical terms they use), I don't really need know what it really is, or what it looks like, I just let my mind fill in the pictures. It's the Human story(s) that are driving the plot along. Have a wonderful Holidays! Xiamise P.S. When do we get more of Jarred?

You certainly have a way of building tension! I am even more worried about Brian now as well. Hell, I am worried about all of Davey's crew back stateside!

Indeed, and what a chapter it is, The situation is sounding more and more dire! I look forward to reading the rest. Note to self; In the future, make sure before you start reading anything else that the story is complete. The waiting is killing me!

I am new to posting here, but I have to say that I Love this story. I have long been a fan of Vampire sories and other dark fantasy and even some horror fiction for years. I love the opening warning and was hoping for something a bit dark, a little twisted and thouroughly erotic. You delivered in Spades! I am anxiously awaiting further adventure and mayhem!