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Like coming for a visit with loving and cherished friends. A great read!
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A most enjoyable read about characters who are very enjoyable to get to know! AB, you continue to hone your writing skills and story telling. Great job!
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Talk about wanting to inject myself into a couple of characters. Jaycen and Troy are my ideals. Also Andy, the idea of another adoption for them is so so appealing.
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Making A New Friend & Meeting New Brothers
Greg commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in Making A New Friend & Meeting New Brothers
Do I see another adoption in the future? Airen would so fit into this loving family. -
AB A very good read. The boys are so love able and endearing as they interact - complete with scenes of Tickles! Tight well constructed tale that left me anxious to read the next chapter. DG
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My all time favorite Characters!
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All sorts of possibilities spreading out from this first chapter! Always impressed with just how many fascinating characters call your brain home. Love your story telling. DG
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To The Medical Center We Go
Greg commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in To The Medical Center We Go
AB your hard work is certainly paying off! You have blended the two storylines seamlessly. Most enjoyable read. DG -
AB This rewrite is well crafted and an improvement over your earlier published story. Leaving the reader hanging with Linda and Baby Rambo, as well as despicable Maddox and his assault on Troy, builds the desired suspense for sure. Can’t wait to see where the boys lead you as they inhabit your brain. DG
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So many possibilities! Your plot thickens in a most exciting way AB. dg
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Maddox s a threat but my money is on Baby Rambo and the Daddies! Great revisions Tickles!
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Oh to be transported into a world with so much love!
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AB-your writing just gets better and better! its also great to get to know these lovable characters again. I would be proud to call each and every one of them Friend. DG
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Very well written. Your writing skills are improving with each story. Shows your dedication to improving your craft. Oh the adventures ahead!
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Wow….talk about sensuality on steroids. The mating of these characters sparks my imagination to no end. Also, this chapter was very well written with your word pictures exceptionally clear in my minds eye. Thank you for the story Andy.
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Garland is a very repulsive and sad character. Sure he is drop dead gorgeous and rich BUT, he’s a stalker and short quite a few brain cells. I never know how to react to a demonic gay character. Deep down I want to like them in-spite of their shortcomings.
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So like the way you show the common humanity between both humans and the forest inhabitants.
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AB-thank you for allowing your characters to share their sweet and loving personalities. DG
