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  1. Closing The applause for big and hairy Larry’s lengthy topping of the muscled and smooth red-headed Vance was quite strong, especially for the size of the audience, which was about 50 at most including the servers and other staff at Trevor’s. The emcee soon appeared from the darkness to embrace the naked actors. Still wearing only a leather pouch over his goods, I found myself having to struggle to look away from the older man’s amazing hairy chest and belly. “My, my, wasn’t that exc
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    Chapter 22

    Simply a gorgeous wedding -- in decorations, yes, but also in content. Whoever (Josh?) wrote the script for it is fantastic!
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    Chapter 20

    Things are really hopping now! My favorite suspect at this point is the lady detective -- Hammet, is it? She was absent a lot, which is just generally suspicious. She's a she. There definitely seems to be a coverup going on and led by the Homicide Detectives -- two likely murders called suicides. I'm loving the slightly crazy banter that is always going on with this Murder Club. Robbie should not stay at home tonight!
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    Chapter 15

    Me, too. During the auction, it ran through my mind that the ultimate romantic gesture would be for Aiden to buy the frog. I had forgotten by the time it showed up on the living room wall. If Will turns Aiden down, may I have him?
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    Chapter 11

    Great rant, @Geron Kees!
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    Chapter 59

    Your comparison of Vance with Joey Stefano is very good, @Summerabbacat. You have a keen eye for connections.
  7. Intermission Before Alan and Pedro’s ovation ended, Trevor stepped in from the darkness. He moved into the space between his new stars, placed a hand gently on each of their backs, and smiled broadly at his guests. I couldn’t help but notice the sexiness of the host even though he was the only one in the spotlight with any clothes on. I wanted to study Pedro’s lengthy shaft and Alan’s more normal and beautiful penis but my eyes kept being pulled to Trevor’s hot chest crisscrossed with th
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    Chapter 6

    Just as everyone has said, this is a very powerful chapter. My guess is that the conversation with Joey on the fire escape (wonderfully rendered) and the aftermath with his father is the key turning point in Will's life. He's not a naive kid anymore. He's not bound to the oppressive religion or family. He's going to be forced to try something new to earn a living -- modeling? painting? something else? And he has learned that he has 2 true friends in the world -- Laura and Aiden. Undoubtedly Joey's demise will be caused in some way by his toxic personality. I can't wait to get to the remaining chapters! Thanks, Josh!
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    Chapter 4

    As @Philippe says, the discussion on the Bible and homosexuality is really great. As a recovering Baptist and late bloomer, I spent several years in that space of reconciling what I felt I experienced with/from God with the narrow interpretations and teachings I was getting in the religious world. Once you break free from those shackles, life gets really good really fast. I hope this will be Will's experience, too. I'm a Will and Aiden shipper -- Waiden? Great work, @Josh Aterovis!
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    Chapter 2

    What a fascinating discussion we've been having here! I joined the party a few months late, but it is all great stuff. I feel like I've been at a wonderful cocktail party at @Josh Aterovis's house in Baltimore (or Balimur, as a local might say). I'm also a recovering Southern Baptist and could talk all night about that BS. But it's late at my house and my bed is calling out. Good night! I'll be back soon.
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    Chapter 1

    Hey Al, Thanks for sharing this deep historical relationship with us in this safe space. Part of me is sad that your friend couldn't share his feelings with you but most of me feels he probably rightly understood it just wasn't in the cards. I had a terrible crush on my college roommate but I loved our friendship so much I just could not risk messing it up by sharing my truth with him. He went on to marriage, kids, divorce, remarriage, etc. I don't think he would have rejected me if I'd been honest about loving him, but I think it would have interfered with our closeness. One of the terrible things about such situations is you can never be 100% sure how your friend will react. Josh, I am also intrigued with your characters. If Will doesn't end up with Aidan, can I have Aidan?
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    Prologue

    Josh, I'm a big fan of Bleeding Hearts and am excited to follow Killian and Will and whoever else you bring along on this new adventure. You've got my attention. After a dream like Will's, I'd be calling a counselor, too! Let 'er role! Ken
  13. Entertainment at the Bacchanal Jack, Javier, Darrel, and I tried to be sure all the guests had fresh drinks before the first act of the entertainment began a couple of minutes after 9:00. Everything started when some floodlights were turned on. They were focused on a section of the deck beside the pool and next to the hot tub with seating for 10. The lighted section of the deck had some interesting furnishings. There was a very sturdy-appearing table that looked about 6-feet square and
  14. Dinner Break Shortly after 6:00, the soon-to-be high school graduate Jack, the hunky married construction worker Javier, the tall ebony stud Darrel, and I were seated at the breakfast table in a nook beside the outdoor patio where we could keep an eye on our colleagues Alan, Pedro, Larry, and Vance as they took over serving the guests while we ate dinner. Our dinner was carefully selected to be “light” but nutritious by Samuel, Billy’s husband and tonight’s chef. Samuel turned out to
  15. Just Before the Party Alan and I were the third vehicle in line at the end of Trevor’s driveway on Monday at around 3:20 p.m. We each grabbed our duffle bag and started up the drive as a cherry-red electric Mustang pulled into place behind us. I was pleased to see Brady behind the wheel. While we were waiting for him, a 2-year-old Jeep Wrangler screeched into place behind Brady. The hot wrestler, Vance, got out with his duffle to join us. The four of us walked up the driveway towards t
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    Chapter 1

    Hi, @weinerdog, for me the idea of 2 horny guys alone in a dormitory is pretty hot! I hope you will enjoy the story. Ken
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    Chapter 55

    @VBlew, @andy cannon, @Summerabbacat, there is much more to cum. I've had multiple possible scenarios playing in my head regarding the action to occur at the party. I think you will all find it exciting. And, hopefully, we can reduce some of those heating bills for our friends from Sydney to Perth! Thanks so much for all your comments. I love them!
  18. Dance Rehearsal I made chicken with a cranberry sauce topping, wild rice, and steamed broccoli for dinner that night (Saturday). I timed the meal so that Alan and I could work out and shower before we ate, so it was about 8:00 when we sat down to eat. As we ate, we shared details of our day. I told him about coming out to Bert and his great reaction to my news. Alan expressed his respect for Bert and also said he was impressed by my courage. “I had a large delivery to Trevor today.
  19. Phone Calls I was walking home from work the day after the party planning meeting when my cell chirped. Brady’s name popped up on the screen. I sat on a bench under a group of pine trees and clicked the button to open the call. “Hi, stud,” I said. “Good afternoon, sweet stuff,” Brady’s melodious baritone came back. “You get major points for calling so soon.” He chuckled. “I plan on collecting a boatload of points soon.” I felt my face flush as I considered what h
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    Chapter 5

    Hi @Howzat. It is a real story, but I haven't posted it yet. It will likely be posted following the conclusion of this epic. I'm putting all my effort into completing this story. So, thanks for asking and thanks for your interest. Look for "Jody" to debut in the next few weeks. I hope it will be worth the wait! Ken
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    Chapter 53

    Hi, @Summerabbacat, your keen eye has caught me in a goof once again. Arizona and New Mexico are neighbors, but since both are pretty large (each is roughly 400 miles in each dimension), it would not make sense for Billy to work in Arizona unless he could work from home. He should be working for the Public Service Company of New Mexico, instead. That was my intention. As for Brady, he works for the Albuquerque Police Department, which is my intention. And Vance, one of the entertainers, attends Arizona State University, which is about 400 miles from Albuquerque. I should be paying you to proof read my chapters before I post them! Thanks.
  22. Introducing the Hotties When everyone had returned from their restroom break, Billy stood and clinked his spoon on his glass. “Before we get into the planning for Monday’s event, let’s introduce ourselves,” Billy instructed. “I’ll start. I’m Billy Holcomb. I’m originally from Ohio but served in the Air Force and was assigned to Kirtland AFB here. I liked the area so much, I stayed after I was discharged. I have an associate’s degree in Accounting from a community college in Cincin
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    Chapter 52

    @Summerabbacat, I often feel I would have fit in better in Australian or Canadian society than American. Especially true the past 7 months. But enough of that; this is not a political forum. Suffice it to say, I find both countries to be much more realistic, sane, healthy, and kind. Good job, Aussies and Canucks!
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    Chapter 52

    @Summerabbacat, once again you have nailed the soundtrack for this story. Love it! As I loved the group all those years ago. Cheers.
  25. The Tuscan Palace We arrived at Trevor’s magnificent Tuscan mansion in Academy Heights about 5:55 that Wednesday afternoon. The door was opened by a striking Hispanic man a few years older than us. He wore a set of well-tailored hospital scrubs in a strong lavender hue and introduced himself as Jaime. He invited us into a marble and gold entry that was about 30 feet across with gorgeous stairs swirling up the curved walls to our right and our left until they met at a point directly oppos
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