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    Epilogue

    I have enjoyed your first three books in this series & look forward to reading & enjoying your other offerings. I'm not one to delve into all the comments left after each chapter, so if my one observation has already been brought to your attention, please forgive my redundancy. My observation/editorial critique in book three is a discrepancy I found & describe as follows: •In the "back & forth" between Killian & Asher that leads up to their break-up, you have Asher choosing to attend George Mason University, followingin his father's footsteps; however... •...toward the end of the story, you have him described as having chosen Georgetown University.🤔 I offer this observation for whatever it may be worth toward story structural integrity. Thank you!😉
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