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Afri

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  1. Afri

    Chapter 4

    Wow, I really love how you built up the story to the kiss. Also I had to chuckle about Scotts and Davids first kiss. I also said "About time" (or at least something as similar to "about time" as my first language gets) to my boyfriend after our first kiss. We hovered around each others lips for a few days before he finally got the courage to make the first move. 😅
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    Chapter 3

    Another great chapter. But I have to admit I thought it's a bit weird to begin the chapter with saying Scott never falls for straight guys and never really was interested in them either, but then starts falling for Luc when thinking he's straight. But I kinda get it. Feelings can be confusing at times and they definitely don't play by any rules, so it's realistic at least. Other than that it's another chapter I really enjoyed. 😄
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    Chapter 2

    Another chapter that's really well written. I love your characters. The conversation between Scott and Josh in the lounge would have been kind of eye opening to younger me. I wish I had read something like that 10 or maybe 15 years ago. I was kind of like what Scott wanted David to be. I was really open and happy around my friends, but I always hid my sexuality when I was out in public. Thinking back at it I didn't like it at all. 😅
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    Chapter 1

    This was a really well written first chapter. I mean, yes, there were some minor things I could complain about (that we only learn the name of the main character in the middle/at the end of the chapter), but considering this story is over 10 years old, I assume your writing improved a lot by now anyway. Plus the pacing was really great. You knew exactly what would happen, yet it did not get boring at all. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story. 😄
  5. Ohh. This looks very promising. Thank you very much! 👀
  6. I'm new to the site, so excuse me if I could have used the filter function for this, but it's a bit overwhelming if I'm honest. Plus this way I'll get a bit of quality control from you guys and not get anything and everything thrown in my face. 😅 Do you have any recommendations for a story set in college? I prefer stories set in our world and the current time. I'm looking for romance between college students (smut would be nice, but it isn't a must). Other than that I'm quite open. Could be roommates, could be first time, could be nerds, jocks, twinks or whoever. It doesn't gave to be finished either as long as it's still being worked on. Just name a story you guys enjoyed. 😄 (Also what genre should I go for if I search for stories like this myself? Romance? General Fiction? Both?)
  7. Hi, I'm Afri. Feel free to call me either that or Andy. ^^ I'm a writer from Europe and started looking for a place to post a story of mine (which was supposed to be only an erotica short story, but it kinda got out of hands and suddenly the two main characters had a fleshed out background story and fell in love. You know how it is sometimes ... 😅). Anyway, I'm looking forward to read some other stories here (mostly into vanilla college stories, preferably NSFW, but only romance fine too) and eventually post my own. Nice to meet you all!
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