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Well, as one of the original crew on Adam's previous website and all the way back to when we were on another Yahoo group together, I must say that this is great news! Yes, Cross Currents is definitely a great story to read from the beginning. It has been posted on Nifty and Tickie's Stories and Archerland. I am happy to hear Adam finally got back to his story as he has been writing and posting a story for a friend who unfortunately could not finish his story. This is the guy Adam really is, and he is definitely somebody to emulate. (Three thumbs up!!!!) Adam, glad to see you smiling again. I will check into the Yahoo Group and see what progress is being made when I have a chance. Take care. BILLP Maboi26

Well, here we are at Chapter13. Wow! A very nice touch to this story. Finally, Jack Gamble learns that his son, Cray is alive and well!!! What is the possibility of this happening in real life? So, now we are going to go through the tip-toeing of a father trying to get a look at his son without being observed. It will be very interesting how you pull this through to a happy meeting face to face. I wonder, does Cray really have the will to meet his father? Despite his mother divorcing his father, the father moving away and doing nothing in the years of young Cray's upbringing due to fear of being either beaten for attempting to see his son, nor the moxie to try and go through the courts for visitation of the child with a member of the Social Services to monitor what was going on. I just want to say that I am happy that now Cray may get a chance to meet his father. It will be interesting to see if the teacher gives the contact information of Bob and Drew, who are Cray's current guardians. Where will this lead the readers in this story. Will Cray be pulled in to a decision of leaving Bob and Drew? I cannot wait for the next chapter to see what actually happens. MABOI26

Jack: Thank you finally for the new series. It was a great beginning for the cliffhanger you left us with on Book 2. I have been wondering all summer long what would happen. I did not see Craig and Michael splitting up as the first chapter of the series. Yes, young love does have it's toll senior year of high school. Some students feel that it is a "break-up" with the reality, and going on their own to different schools and studying different areas of study is the best thing. Yes, I remember! Although things have played out so far, I am honestly looking forward to the summer work of Craig. I am sure that we will see some of the other characters of previous stories interweave with the story. I cannot wait for the next chapter. MABOI26

Jack, I have been an avid fan who has gone through all your stories and I am looking forward to your story Shifting Sands when it is available. Just curious, what about the guys from Cali? Will we hear from them again? Will you do another story about Mike, Dave etc? Just curious what they are up to these days. BILLP

Hello Jack! Well, I finally got a chance to see the final chapters of Splash on the Web. It is interesting how the story encompassed many scenarios and visits with other characters of other stories that you have written. I believe that if you break the law, you will be sought and taken into custody. This is what we see here in this story. I am happy that the culpret Rory was arrested and he will be brought to justice from a standpoint of the Country of Los Angeles, in the State of California. Naturally, for those of us who can remember Dragnet and Perry Mason, Justice will prevail. I cannot wait for the next story to be posted. I cannot wait to see what will happen when the father of a child that was given up comes to the City where the child is located and the child finds out who hes is. This should be interesting. Thank you for the stories Jack. See you soon. MABOI26

Hello Jack. I am happy to find the newest story "SPLASH ON THE WEB" finally in progress. I had read the first 10 Chapters and found Chapter 11 on the board. This is a very interesting story. There is interesting curves and twirls that seem to keep the plot going. I for one am happy that the killer has dentified on film and makes the job of closing the case for the locals an easy job. However, what is going on in the background, there was a pool party at Dave and Mike's, and we know there is going to be some interesting dialogues. Been a while to their home, wonder what has changed? Doug and Brent are in their full capacities of profession. Wonder what Brent/Brad has been up to? Oleg and his "Golden Boy" are due to get together for a night. This ought to be interesting. Seems Oleg was reluctant to give up a night of passion for a massage. Wonder if they will zoom off to Palm Springs again. (That is really a nice place. I checked them links Jack) (BTW, have you been there?) Doug has a movie that needs to be done. Will he actually get to the second film that he is talking about before the story ends? I am also happy to learn that Shifting Sands will be posted the latter part of 2009. Makes for a great read on a Fall Night. As always, good writing Jack. Keep up the good work.

Hey Jack. Just had the opportunity to check your newest writing "SPLASH ON THE WEB". I have taken the readings in a couple of sessions and wanted to give you some feedback: ** Well, this story is well written like the other stories that preceded. ** Story line plausible to current events and time line. ** I like how you have inter-twined the characters of Dome and Teapots with this story. Glad to see that the original characters are doing well. Can't wait to see if there will be a Doug, Bret, and David saga and now that Doug's son has grown and graduating from Law School. Looks like another "Counselor" on the books. ** Would be nice to see Thad and Doug's son get things together. ** I wanna see what Oleg and his new boy toy will be up to as well, however, looks like he may be heading to Europe if the doo-doo hits the fan. ** Yeah Joe is right. Rory will be screwing up real soon, so it will be nice to see justice served. Who knows, we may get to see the Russian Marfia show up!!! ** Think that Andy and his new "Protection" may be slipping off to some place more quiet and comfortable before too long. Can't wait for next Chapter MABOI26