Hey everyone, hope you checked out my stories "Protected, Part One." and "The Roommate." I wanted to say a few things about a couple of emails I have gotten.
One said: "I read the roommate and i liked it but it revolved too much around sex. you write good but you can focus on other stuff to."
I completely agree with this person. I wrote "The Roommate" a couple of years ago specifically FOR and Erotic Stories site. I only shared it here because I feel I should post my works so far. (There aren't very many.)
Also, despite the sex scene in "Protected, Part One." I feel like it has more substance, and as a continuing story will certainly not be revolving around sex throughout the chapters. I appreciate all comments though, thanks!