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22 hours ago, andy cannon said:

A beautiful summation of the pain of loss? Unrequited love?

I feel like the perspective of the reader defines what it is to them.

32 minutes ago, Parker Owens said:

Thank you for sharing poetry with us. We all need more of it. I enjoyed reading this. It made me think of falling stars, for some reason. 

Thank you.

2 hours ago, Marvin B said:

Hi XavierHutcherson 0.  Oh my, sounds like a fun childhood!

 

I think i did everything here except the "climax". lol I couldn't do that till middle-school 😂

But yes, I have many fun memories as far back as  can remember! 🥰😘

loved this! read t in 1 day!

On 3/5/2013 at 9:45 PM, Myr said:

Well, that's one way to get warm, that's for certain.

i certainly wouldnt mind Jap warming ME up that way! 🥵

those boys must feel real powerful unloading all of their piss on jacky's sweet face while hes imobilized! Jap will be on his way o deal with this mess soon enough!

On 3/5/2013 at 6:21 PM, Myr said:

It seems like a really bad idea to go up against Jap... probably don't want to be within 2000 yards of him, in fact.

I just hope Jacky is ok! I love every scene they hae together! 🤧

good update!

Another great chapter with Jap and Jacky! they are my favorite cuple by far! Jacky is so lucky to have such a sexy bpyfriend as Jap who can take the pounding of his entire length at only 12 years old! I doubt this will be the last time Japs tight little harless ass gets a gallon of cum in this story! great job!

Excelent developement with the twins! been waiting for the to  shag up. 😍

Absolutely loved this chapter! As the youngest, Jap always had a favored place in my heart! I am not disappointed with his first chapter taking the narrative lead. Reading Jap give the more physically imposing 13yo Jacky his first sexual experience was a delight. Not to say i was bored reading Jacky successfully deepthroat Jap to completion!  And i loved the reference to Nifty.org ! Im a huge reader there as well. 

loved this story so much! I  would love to read a followup!

Reminds me of all the "playtiime" games i played in with other boys as a kid! 🫣

Love the simple yet arousing playfulness of this oem. good job!

very exciting to read!! love it!

Anthony must know that sometimes it is also necessary to protect one's family from one's own family

I propose that Dylan tells Jessica that Jake is her brother's killer, so the two of them face off and destroy each other with guns and fists. Two birds with one stone, less weight on his shoulders

Just now, Cane23 said:

The problem is that Dylan is teenager with many conflicted emotions. It's very difficult to control them and he never knows which one will prevail.

Brain says - get away from them as far as possible!

Heart on a good day says - I know he hurt me, but I cannot forget how he was kind and good before that. Maybe he can really change for better! 

Heart on a bad day says - revenge to the bastard!

Dick says - just forget everything and F*CK him!

Actually, I don't think we can victimize Liam here like people usually do with bullies. His mother is sane enough not to mention her son in front of Dylan once he mentioned what a monster her son was, and his father was never aggressive in front of him, meaning that Liam doesn't know that the apple didn't fall far from the tree. Liam has no excuses, and if he's going to change for the better, that's fine, but if Dylan prefers to just never see him in his life again, it's not surprising either.

Just now, Al Norris said:

Restraining orders aren't worth the court cost. A piece of paper means nothing to anyone who wants to attack you.

Then he is a god-forsaken soul. If we go that way, leaking the evidence so that they can arrest as many people involved in this mafia as possible would put them in danger of suffering reprisals.

I don't know how much you all agree with me, but I think there is no difference between forgiving Liam and forgiving Jake. I just think that after everything Dylan has been through he should move out and make sure he has more than one restraining order to protect himself from all the nefarious beings that have come knocking on his door

Yep, Jessica has proven to be impulsive and stupid enough not to think about what she says lol the good thing about those types of people is that sooner or later they crash into reality

If you ask me, I don't even think Emma's alleged bullying experience is true lol 

It is dystopian to remember that in fact, minor boys being groomed by adult women who do not go to jail for it and no one is surprised is something that happens in real life

I don't give a damn about the goal or development of this story as long as Jake marries Dylan in the end and the two live happily ever after. You can tell they're good for each other.