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  1. I understand his guilt and he would probably lose his job and maybe even be charged with assault. But why leave the relationship just when he really needs support. It could be a good test the strength of his relationship. People are strange. This is not a criticism of your writing Talo, maybe a comment on human nature. Good job.
  2. The naked fairy sprinkles his magic dust and poof; the characters’ clothes disappear as they go on a naked romp through the bush. But don’t get me wrong, there is a very serious side to this story. Read how a couple of enlightened teachers guide their students through the class of unlearning. We are all born naked of body and naked of mind. But as soon as we are born parents and society plus political, social and religious leaders want to cover that body and instil their own beliefs in the mind. On the surface some of this story might appear misogynistic, but look deeper for the real mess
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    Chapter 45

    Firstly... Why the fuck hasn't he brought up Jamie Cross' party invitation yet? I feel like Billy's going to drag it out until the eventual party date and force Brandon with an ultimatum that may not bode so well for their relationship. Secondly... A lot of people over the last few chapters have badmouthed Billy for his lack of maturity concerning his mother's stance on his relationship with Brandon. But the truth is he's come a long way to get to where he is with Brandon relationship-wise and Billy's mom is completely holding him back. Billy seems to glaze over the fact that how bot
  4. Hello guys and girls, I am currently developing a story and I’d like to get feedback from you. It is a three-part story; each part tells the story of one character in this unreciprocated love triangle. Here it is VERY summarized, so please forgive me if there are plot holes – let me know! (if this is NOT the right place for this, please forgive me and let me know) John was a 36 years old lawyer, married to Robert, who was 25 years-old aspiring actor and brother to Daniel, a 30 years old executive assistant. John and Robert had been married fo
  5. http://www.likeolda.hu/szovegek/a-sarkany-fejeert-a-lanyom-keze… Lmao lmao lmao Text says"The dragons head" The king says "my daughter's hand" 😂😂😂Not exactly the way it was meant in the fairy tale😂😂😂
  6. Apple dual core https://goo.gl/images/GmUagz 😂😂😂😂
  7. Sure it wasn't talking about some boring stuff? 😂😂😂
  8. Well Edda made a song for Christmas, it's not only to get me in the holidays... but also to think about some things...
  9. Oh honey, there's nothing like laughing with family and friends around the dinner table during the holidays. And seriously? How can anyone be offended by Dominick, he's a hoot!
  10. Oh my goodness, what an amazing young man. This gave me chills.
  11. I was a only 14 years old the first time I heard this song from the movie 'Cooley High.' Not many movies reduce me to tears, but during the funeral scene at the end, I balled like a baby. But I must admit, this version by Boyz II Men makes me choke up. Maybe it's the time of the year, but I've been listening to some pretty sad tunes lately. lol I guess sometimes we need to get our blues on, before we pick ourselves back up, and remember the fond memories of those who have left us. I wish all a Merry Christmas (I know that's not very PC right now,) but hey...we need to grab hold of anything tha
  12. "A lot of people are crazy, cruel and negative. They got a little too much time on their hands to discuss everybody else. I have a limited amount of energy to blow in a day. I'd rather read something that I like or watch a program I enjoy or ride my damn motorcycle or throw back a couple of shots of tequila with my friends." ~ Queen Latifah
  13. The queen of soul...nuff said.
  14. Oh dear... I didn't see that coming. I thought there was going to be some smooth sailing ahead (although I should have known better ) after Nathan seemed to be OK about Fran. Another great chapter @Dodger Sue manages to irritate me in every chapter. Even more so than Don, lately. Because I don't think she's naturally bigoted, so she should know better, but she's allowing his ignorance and bigotry control her, and her actions seem to be featured more in the story so far.
  15. Yeah...old...and now another year older...remind me to bug you with it on COTT.... LMAO okay, sorry I couldn`t resist. Hoping we`ll see a lot more of these birthday wishes in the future.
  16. Have a great one man. Happy birthday.
  17. My favorite Christmas song by the classy Nat King Cole.
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    Chapter 6

    I was wrong, Derek's actually no better than the rest of them.
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    Chapter 5

    Derek hitting Shane? So not cool. No wonder the kid's so messed up. Even those who do like him, mess him around. Tell him to meet them, and then not show up. Especially after he went to one of their games for them. Doesn't want to be seen with Shane? Sorry to say, but Derek's barely better than the rest.
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