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  1. Cleaning standards don't align? A universal situation and since no gravestone mentions spotless floors, I feel it's a minor issue. Floors, houses, material things come and go, stay healthy and happy inside yourself--adapt and/or invent. This thought this won't eliminate dirt and it may structure an atmosphere where more respect is offered to the person who makes the good life happen. Be glad for the subconscious; you words will linger to reemerge later in your children's lives. Encourage them to study Microbiology. As a kid, I reveled in using the Electrolux floor-cleaning attachments and the smell of the paste wax that came in a yellow tin. That old machine drowned out all the noise around me, my socked feet stepped across the reflected light, I inhaled the unique aroma of carnauba from a distant palm. No one bothered me for hours as I pushed the whirling brushes left and right--I imagined kids around the world with brooms, mops, shaking rugs outside in the same moment. A spiritual task, cleaning floors, it developed a perspective that the repetitive motions of mundane chores were akin to chants of the monks. v
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    Talon's backstory is so heartbreaking. To lose both parents and then to be ostracized, bullied, and tortured that way!! He is a better man than I am because I would have definitely amputated Mallex's arm in a way no magic could ever repair it! Fingers crossed that Eon means what he says in support of Kalian...but what I really wanna see is Eon put Mallex in his place (pretty please). Another superb (and quickly updated) chapter. Can't wait for the next installment.
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    Great strides for Kalian! Mallex is such a power-hungry tool. He definitely doesn't deserve a year much less any time to "be better" but I suspect this is Kalian formulating a plan of escape for himself. Also, in my mind Talon looks like Adam Driver (hottie) so I'm all for him 100%
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    At Last

    Another awesome chapter. Talon is fine just as he is. A little sass has never hurt anybody 😂
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    The Dark

    Lovely beginning. Can't wait for more 😁
  6. Loved the way you wrapped it all up. Gonna miss these guys 😭
  7. Not gonna lie, my heart skipped a beat when Penn asked to shower first after spending the day with Jason...but that was smoothed out easily. These two are so obviously meant for each other! Also, it would be great for closure if Lee and Nash actually do have lunch and talk because Nash clearly still has questions. Friendship is out of the questions but it would probably be better for Nash to hear it all straight from the source and keep moving forward with his life. One more!!! Can't wait.
  8. The kids waited for the perfect moment to continue the wolf howls and cat meows. Awesome chapter. Can't wait for the last two!
  9. Penn's POV about the conversation with his brothers would be good too... just throwing that out there. I'd love to read how he, Ryan, and Logan plotted and executed that sweet move on "poor unsuspecting Nash" and then the follow-up after the high five. But I'll also take whatever you give me @Mrsgnomie
  10. What a rollercoaster of emotions these two (and Mrsgnomie) have put us through. Mature communication with a little bit of humor. Perfect recipe for a successful relationship going forward.
  11. This is such a tough scenario. I feel like Penn's family can see that both of these fools belong together. Their methods are just off-putting and downright trashy but they are pushing them towards a goal: Realize what you had/have and make a decision. I commented on last chapter that I wanted Jason to be Penn's HEA, but after this chapter it's very obvious that these two cannot just have a platonic friendship. Loved the chapter Mrsgnomie. I graciously await the next installment.
  12. It would be awesome for their characters to get their HEA together. Let's see how Mrsgnomie weaves this web!
  13. Jason is a great choice for these exact reasons. That whole misunderstanding and then not trying to hash is out and ignoring Penn only come back and try to "win him back" just doesn't sit right with me. Personally I'm pulling for Jason and a move to California. Let Penn sell the house to Nash since he's so attached to it, and let Nash meet someone new and have his happily ever after too. This story could literally go anywhere at this point and this is what makes it amazing, in my eyes.
  14. Nash. Jason. Neither. At this point, it's gonna be a rollercoaster either way
  15. A grand hot mess of desperation and apologies and lust. And jealousy.
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