Pete McDaniel

I have the pleasure of reading Jack's stories on this site before they are posted on crvboy. It feels like a sneak preview. LOL. Jack has also been so kind as to exchange emails with me about his stores and about himself. I strongly agree that his writing keeps improving. Sometimes even chapter to chapter. I feel like I know his characters and feel for them. Can't wait to see what Jack will do with them. I can lust after them. They seem that real. I keep cheering him on to keep writing. I a greedy for more, more, more. If I could afford to pay him to write I would. He is that good. He now has enough work to consider trying to publish is some format. I hope he does so soon. As far as shifting sand goes right now I am worried about what negative thing may be introduced to move the story along. I have become a softy in my old age. Only happy endings for me now.

Finished Test of Blood and it was hard to believe that it was not written by Mercedes herself. I loved it. Please write more stories set in Valdemar

Your rewrites and new work on Splash on the Web are a pleasure to read. I like the fact that you are such a fast writer. Your stories move fast as well. Your plot is unpredictable which I enjoy. Pete McDaniel