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LadyDe - Sorry, yes in that last bit I did mean Trey. I don't like how everything is sex motivated there doesn't seem to be much more to anyone.

I always try to find decent were- stories but I'm not sure really how this seems different from many others, other than the development of Parker, for example all Colton seems to be is a hot guy with stalker issues. It'd be nice to see something more from his side actually giving him so personality rather than all his drive be about sex. Protect Parker - 'cause I want sex, stalk Parker - I want sex, Talk about Parker - I wanna fuck Parker and vice versa, Become mascot - Might get sex, Talk to another gay guy (Jed) - I might get sex. Also this whole big, near-hairless hunk with the skinny/swimmers build socially awkward guy plotline is so overused, I think so far the only character I actually want to find out more about is Jed he seems like the only one who thinks about more than sex but probably only because he knows that Colton has 'claimed' him as his mate.

I'll admit when I read the summary I was hesitant as many many stories with this theme don't work but this one really did, it was lovely to see the progression and development of the characters, a great story and always a nice surprise to see something set in the UK! Thank you!

This one's better than the last one I tried Oh and if you flip it upside down it says 'Father of a dream'. Have a look see

I really don't like my first one and I'm trying to make a second, is there ANY clues you could give to make it easier? Please!

I had a play around and made this, it's not too great but oh well, I'll try to make a better one later .