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Reflections - 3. Chapter 3
A poem written about one of my passions in life - White Water Rafting
The mist hangs in the air
A cloud masking the rage
Of the demon within the turmoil
At the bottom of the gorge.
Thrill erupts in the mind
The sole begins to feel the beat
Of a heart raging with anticipation
The excitement leaves no retreat.
A team climbs over the rubber
The raft is ready to go
Nine lives pulled together at once
As the boat moves out into the flow.
The water is white, angry and bright
Eyes gleam with ecstasy
Adrenaline breads a frenzy
As nine men make a legacy.
There is no way back
Only forward into oblivion
Onwards we row
Desire has us driven.
And at the close of the day
The experience is vivid
A moment of pure freedom
A feeling unknown to the timid.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you.
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