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  • 07/06/2011
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Transition - 1. The Poem

Dark

Cold
Quiet
Empty

Then a white mist

Wispy
Twirls of emotion

Picking up pace
Circling

Rising
Thickening

Whispering
Quietly

Then louder
A whirling wind of devotion

Startling force
A large white cloud

Enveloping
Engulfing
Blinding

Light

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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 
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Tenebrae

That was exquisite. I had to read over it a few times before the chills started, but once they did -- beautiful. The linear graphics created by the line by line posting would've been distracting in any other poem, but here they worked with the visual given by the words.

 

A very good job!

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On 07/14/2011 07:57 AM, Tenebrae said:
That was exquisite. I had to read over it a few times before the chills started, but once they did -- beautiful. The linear graphics created by the line by line posting would've been distracting in any other poem, but here they worked with the visual given by the words.

 

A very good job!

Thank you so much :D
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