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this careful dance

harveybirdman

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a faltered glance, a look askance

but who would stop to guess the chance?

 

blushed cheeks with velvet voice

yet no one knew there was a choice

 

a knowing smile, he looks away

both know again, again we'll play

 

one lies yearning, try not to kill

this delicate bloom by keeping still

 

the other's heart, it is unknown

unknown as well is what was sown

 

and so we stage this careful dance

leave nothing open nor ope' to chance

 

e'er part as friends though hope we might

I say, good sir, a fair good night

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asamvav111

asamvav111 1,617

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"...yet no one knew there was a choice"

 

Splendid!

Fishwings

Fishwings 1,011

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OMAGOMASDOHIASDHASDMKLadsmlksadmlkasdmkla

Fishwings

Fishwings 1,011

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This was so amazing it made my heart jump *A* You've captured the uncertainty of first loves remarkably. I'm a huge fan.

harveybirdman

harveybirdman 13

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The experience is unforgettable. I get a grin when I remember. 

harveybirdman

harveybirdman 13

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And dare I ask about that acronym, Luc?

Fishwings

Fishwings 1,011

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And dare I ask about that acronym, Luc?

 

LOL that started out as an acronym then turned into an explosion of emotion that happened on the keyboard

harveybirdman

harveybirdman 13

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I like how this outburst fell into a dramatic whisper at the end. Well played.

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