EmDee Posted March 12, 2012 Posted March 12, 2012 Hi y'all~ New story is up! It's called Fill in the Blanks. This one is a collaboration with another GA Author. I hope you guys will give it a chance and enjoy it. Let us know what you guys think! Also if you pay close attention, you might end up seeing some familiar faces in the story. Thanks for reading, Em Summary: Happily married for five years, Arthur and James had it all. Things were going exactly as planned until they were hit with sudden unexpected events that changed everything. Follow them on their journey as they try to fill in the blanks. Link: http://www.gayauthor...fillintheblanks
ryan jo Posted March 12, 2012 Posted March 12, 2012 Hey guys! This is my first time ever posting anything. This collaboration would not be possible without Em.
Dee Posted March 12, 2012 Posted March 12, 2012 So far it's interesting. I think I'll definitely need to read more to get into the whole kids thing, but so far so good. Other than a few overused exclamation points and some places that I feel could use a bit more detail, you guys have something good going. 2
ryan jo Posted March 12, 2012 Posted March 12, 2012 Thank you, Dee. We got rid of some of the exclamation points. Certain descriptions were also added, so hopefully it helps readers visualize a scene a bit better.
Dee Posted March 12, 2012 Posted March 12, 2012 I'll have to check it out when I have a bit of time. This week is going to be just as hectic as the next! D: Tonight I shall take a look-see.
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