EmDee

Jodhpur and the Mehrangarh Fort: Auto Rickshaws:

Chapter 2 is now live! Link: https://www.gayauthors.org/story/EmDee/lostinthesanddunes/2

Chapter 02 - Vanished “C’mon Sean, just give this a chance. You never know, maybe something good will come out of it.” Sean shot a glare towards Michelle where she was perched up on the corner of his desk. She was tossing the quartz he used as a paperweight from one hand to the other. “Give me that! You’ll break it,” he grunted, snatching it out of her hands and shooting another glare at his colleague. Michelle was a fellow biology professor at NYU and though they had become grea

Ok I gotta say, I LOVE your reviews Lisa!! They always make me think so damn hard haha And you catch all of my errors that I never seem to see! The time line is pretty confusing, I was toying with the idea of adding the date before each "segment" but didn't go through with it. Maybe I'll go back and add it if the next few chapters still seem too confusing. But let's see if I can clear up the timeline for this chapter and fix some of the mistakes you caught… So Sean & Tommy started dating 6 months before the "cheating" took place, so let's say December 1, 2011. Then 6 months later on June 1, 2012 Tommy caught Sean in bed with John and left. 11 days later (June 12) Sean received the "call" that set everything in motion, and 3 days later (June 15) he arrived in India where the main story kicks off. It took him three days to get to India because of all the layovers (speaking from my own experience lol). The flashback where Tommy tells Sean about George probably took place somewhere mid-April (April 15), so I need to correct that in the story and say they were dating for "four and a half months/almost 5 months" instead of "6 months". The specific dates don't have to be exact, but this is generally the range I was aiming for when writing. There's going to be a lot of jumping back and forth in this story and hopefully it won't be too confusing lol. But if it does get hard to follow, let me know again and I'll add specific dates in the beginning of each part. Thanks for always spotting my mistakes! And don't worry, I can never forget Davey

Thanks Terry! I'm glad you like Sean, because I usually find readers not having any sympathy for characters that cheat. There's a lot more to Sean's story that meets the eye at the moment and it will all come out with time.

Feel free to discuss or ask any questions here about my new story Lost in the Sand Dunes. One mistake. One last chance to fix it, but time’s about to run out. Summary: Sean thought everything was perfect after he found Tommy—the love of his life. But one mistake ruined everything and Sean’s actions have lost him the very person he loved the most. Now Sean has to find Tommy once again, but this time, Tommy’s life may depend on it. Link: http://www.gayauthor...tinthesanddunes

Thanks Layla! I'm glad this chapter was enough to hook the readers. I know it doesn't explain much about what's actually going on, but all that will come over time.

Thanks GJ! I wanted to try something different and new so I started writing this chapter back in April. Thought it was about time I posted it to see what kind of response it gets.

Jodhpur is definitely a beautiful place. I've only ever been there once when I was eight years old, but its image has stuck in my mind until this day. Thanks for reading Stephen, hope you will enjoy what I have in store.

Thanks so much Layla! It means a lot when readers tell me that they enjoy my stories because most of the time I still feel like a noob at writing. I still have loads to learn and improve on. I'm really glad you're loving the characters and their interactions because I have the most fun writing those.

Thanks for reading layla!

With both Dean and Tyler both having their own supporters, I'm starting to dread the end when one of the groups of readers is going to be disappointed lol

With both Dean and Tyler both having their own supporters, I'm starting to dread the end when one of the groups of readers is going to be disappointed lol

With both Dean and Tyler both having their own supporters, I'm starting to dread the end when one of the groups of readers is going to be disappointed lol

With both Dean and Tyler both having their own supporters, I'm starting to dread the end when one of the groups of readers is going to be disappointed lol