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Chapter 3 Spencer held his eyes closed, breathing as though he had been running for the last hour. The house was dark still, except for the hallway light that he left on all the time. He lay back on the sofa, running his hands along the suede. He had never felt so tired after a day at work, worn out, and ready to crash. His head throbbed and his stomach roiled. He had eaten half of his lunch earlier, but now he felt like he could eat an entire cow. If his stomach would stop knotting up
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Thanks, everyone, for the comments and feedback. my co-author and I appreciate it very much. Glad you enjoyed the story and thank you for taking the time to read it.
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Hi, thanks for the feedback. I don't have a beta, and this is a draft. I'm just seeing how it plays out. I know it seems a bit sudden, but there is a reason for the asking for a date. The thing is, spencer doesn't quite know what the color tones are yet. So, yeah, that is part of the unfolding story. the sexual attraction happens this way for a reason, though. I promise that. I'm playing with something new for me as a writer, and I hope that it becomes enjoyable. I have completed the next chapter, but I want to make sure it reads well enough before posting. I hope that the story will keep your interest along the way.
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We shall see. Adrien is going to be fun to write. He's playful, and now that he's changing his life, he feels like he doesn't have to live by a certain set of rules any more.
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Chapter 2 “How’s the headache today?” Rebecca asked. Spencer looked at her, debating whether her dress was office-friendly or not. He could see the tattoo on her thigh, and the top cut just above her breasts. Flaming red and pink streaks alternated around it, and the neck had an opening that showed off another of her tattoos. At least she didn’t have a million piercings. If he remembered, he would remind her that his business was professional and he didn’t need her looking like she w
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Thank you! Chapter 2 is done, but I need to go back and add some things. Appreciate the comment and feedback
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Thank you! We shall see how the necklace plays into the story. I'm glad you liked the opening.
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Spencer St. James has been experiencing some strange things lately. He doesn't know why, or what is going on, but it's starting to affect him physically. Headaches, throwing up, and unfamiliar emotions. As he copes with all of this, he meets Adrien Parsons, a strange, calming presence who is interested in him. Spencer isn't quite sure what to make of it all, but he's going to find out, no matter what--even if it means he has to give up a chance at love.
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Chapter 1 Nighttime fell like a bomb. Spencer finished his meal in the quiet of his car and took a deep breath. The day had been overwhelming, like the last few weeks, and he needed the silence. He crumpled the trash and discarded the bag on the passenger’s seat. McDonald’s was his least-favorite fast food, but it was on the way to the graveyard. He got out of the car, locking it with his key fob and rubbed his temples for a moment. Another headache was the last thing he needed,
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Two sets of imploring eyes stared at Josh. He blinked and looked again, realizing it wasn’t the type of imploring eyes his fantasy world had created. No, these were canine and rough-looking. “Uh, Chris?” “Oh, Josh! I’m sorry. I should’ve called or texted you, but my mobile went dead.” “Okay… who are they?” Josh turned to look at Chris, who had started to approach him. “Strays. I couldn’t very well leave them.” Josh stood for a moment, looking at the pair of untidy dogs.
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Thanks so much! Yeah, it's just a little novella love story. Thanks. Glad you're enjoying it.
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Yes, another date coming. It will be their place on the ship. hehe
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Chapter 6: Home Again
Lee Marchais commented on Lee Marchais's story chapter in Chapter 6: Home Again
Yeah, Josh is good a lot of things, but he’s not the sort to be able to give all his time to caring for his father, or mother, for that matter. He has been in need of a life for a long time. -
Chapter 6: Home Again
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There is still an epilogue to come! Thanks so much for reading and commenting. We appreciate -
Chapter 6: Home Again
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Chapter 6: Home Again
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Josh didn’t want to get out of bed. It felt too nice to have Chris’s legs tucked between his akimbo. He sighed, though, and opened his eyes anyway. Stretching would dislodge the strange way Chris had his legs wrapped around Josh’s, so he didn’t move, just kissed Chris and made sure he put more behind it than a “you’re amazing, and I love you”; it was more like “I want you so much my body’s aching.” Cruel, Josh knew, to wake him up, but they really couldn’t spend all day in bed. When Chris respon
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I know! I need wheels on my luggage, too. Especially since I travel a lot more now. And the Piano Bar becomes a favorite location for the pair. And they even talk about it later in the story. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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So glad you guys are enjoying thr story. Yeah, Chris thought it was just him with sn attraction, so he definitely surprised Josh when he led the charge on sexual encounters. Lol. Josh didn’t really know what hit him. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Thank you, guys, for your comments. They mean a lot to my co-author and I. Yeah, there will be a solution, I promise. I happy one. I am doing some editing on the last few chapters right now, but will still get the next one posted by Saturday.
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The bed was warm and comfortable. Josh lie there stroking Chris’s chest with his fingertips. “You don’t get weird about talking and a little cuddling after sex, do you?” “…No. Should I?” “Some guys do.” Josh kissed Chris’s chest and wrapped an arm around him. Chris smiled. “I can’t imagine why.” “You’d be surprised. Macho types and all that. I had one ex that refused to let me touch him after we had sex.” “I’m not surprised you dumped him.” Chris’s skin was sof
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It didn’t take long, a few days at most, for the awkwardness of a new relationship to fade, at least for Josh. What would happen after the cruise ended was still up in the air, but Josh tried not to think about it too much. He wanted to make the most of the time he had left with Chris, which wasn’t much. They’d spent most of the time between Chris’s cabin, no sex, just some kissing and sleeping that ended up with Josh wrapped around Chris a little too tightly for Chris’s comfort, though Chris wa
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The first week rolled into the second. He woke up early, ready to see Chris, often before breakfast hours began. Then he paced in his room, wondering if Chris had left already or if he’d get to see him. When he missed him, disappointment welled and shadowed him all morning. Then they caught each other at lunch and Josh would smile and soak up everything Chris told him about his day, just as Chris seemed to soak up everything that Josh had to say himself. He never went looking for him; they just
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