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  1. Boy Mercury X
    Thanks, @Howzat. I always look forward to your comments. One thing I personally liked, re the lease, was how they each needed to take some chances and get out of their comfort zone.
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    So glad you enjoyed it. Sometimes I'm not 100% certain where to go in a story, but in this one, especially by the third installment, I knew everything without any doubt.
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    I hope I didn't screw up any descriptions of the work, being not at all handy in that way.
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    Thanks! You've got one installment left. I hope you find it satisfying.
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    Mission accomplished.
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    Thank you @dboggs9700, very glad to know you enjoyed it.
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    @Cane23 I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I have to admit, the tense dinner was lifted from life, with the real life Dan inspiration's bigger than life dad insisting he'd be perfectly fine in one of those wicker chairs. Most tense meal of my life.
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    Chapter 1: The Flaw in the Scheme The dust in the Columbia City house hadn't even begun to settle. It hung in the air, catching the late afternoon light pouring through the bare, curtainless windows. We were tangled together on the canvas drop cloth in the center of the living room—and it wasn’t the only thing that had been gutted. My insides were still twitching, hypersensitive from the pounding my ex-brother-in-law Dan had just delivered. I could feel the wet slide of his cum an
  9. Boy Mercury X
    Thanks @Jack2. Glad you're enjoying it. The final installment, even more fleshed out, should be released tomorrow.
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    You're so on the right track. Then there's the kids. Expect one family dinner that I have to admit I borrowed shamelessly from real life.
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    You're so welcome. I think part two was in some ways a reverse of part one. But now that Rami and Dan have reached a balance, there's one more installment to go.
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    Thanks @Cane23. Being this far along I'm not going to break the last installments into shorter parts, but I'll absolutely consider that for future stories that are longer.
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    To be honest, it was fun to explore the "after" of the climax in the first story. Rami spent years being irritated by Dan, so it stands to reason that one sexual encounter is not a good basis for Dan to move into his tiny, curated apartment.
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    Thanks, @Cane23. We've still got the final installment left, leaving room for everyone to learn and grow.
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    Thanks, @Howzat buddy. Glad the plot twist worked. There's actually a second plot twist buried in there, more suggested as possible than stated. (I do think Sam is inviting Jakob to the big day!)
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    Chapter 1: Landslide My Queen-sized bed was not engineered for this. It was a sleek, low-profile platform frame—a discontinued prototype that I’d quietly diverted from a staging warehouse. It was designed for clean lines, minimalist aesthetics, and the occasional, efficient encounter with a guy of my own compact build. It was absolutely not designed to withstand the rhythmic, pile-driving force of a two-hundred-and-seventy-pound Sales Manager. The headboard slammed against th
  17. Boy Mercury X
    Two man with vastly different life experiences, one gay and one nominally straight, who happen to be ex brothers in law, with complicated family stuations between them... what problems could there possibly be?
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    Thanks @dboggs9700, I had intended to publish part two next week, but I think I'll get it out there tomorrow. Dan and Rami might look like the coast is clear, but there are some unanticipated obstacles that make Linda the realtor look easy.
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    There's definitely more to come. I hope you'll enjoy it.
  20. Boy Mercury X
    Thanks @Carybr. There are to more installments of the story to come.
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    Chapter 1: Good Bones I didn’t need to wait for Dan to let me in. My thumb moved automatically to the keypad on the side door, punching in the code I hadn’t used in two years. 2-0-2-0. The year they were married. BEEP. BEEP. BEEP. BEEP. The heavy mechanical bolt disengaged with a groan. KA-CHUNK. I stepped inside. The silence hit me harder than the heat. It was weird. I’d spent holidays here, birthdays, awkward Sunday dinners where I watched my sister shrink to fit into
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    Rami is a home stager, selling the illusion of perfection. His ex brother-in-law Dan is everything he's not supposed to want: too big, too hairy, too straight, too... Dan. But working together with one sweaty week to get Dan's house on the market proves to Rami that the best things in life can't be curated.
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    It does change the dynamic a bit, doesn't it?
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    Thanks for reading and commenting, @VBlew. Glad the flip worked!
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    Boy Mercury X commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in The Fit

    Thanks @dboggs9700 I’m so glad you enjoyed the story. I don’t have a follow up planned, but I have a longer story coming tomorrow you may enjoy, A Two Man Job. Joe
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