donna4953

Another winning story in our future.

God I hate when a story this good ends, Hopefully you can continue it with Robert continuing Carltons work though Robert seems a little leery whether he can do it but I think he can, You are a great writer and hope you continue to write these great type of stories.

What about the abandoned child who was at the gate at the end of the last chapter?

CL this is where Chapter 16 goes for the next chapter. This closes with a lawsuit recommended and Ch 16 starts with Charlton talking to Judy about an interesting case and previous lawsuits against this company. then chapter 17 opens with Charlton talking with Harry with no mention of where Harry came from in the previous chapter. I don't doubt your writings show chapter 16 as explaining how Harry came to be but this website probably doesn't match your continuity. Check the 2 incongruitous chapters and you will see what you may have written for ch 16 in your writing and what was posted here are probably not the same. I know this probably upsets you me being a nudge about this but this story is to beautiful to get messed up now. I check this website 3-4 times impatient for the next chapter it is so good.

I understand that but at the end of chapter 15 they were in London then in chapter 16 Carlton is working a new case back in the US and talking to Sal with 30 boys and starting to put a pool in. in chapter 36 he meets with the architect examining pool designs and now in this chapter he is meeting Sal for the first time. Usually the chapter explains how and why Alex brings the boys to Charlton but chapter 16 does not do that. Just to say I love the story anyway

If I am not mistaken this is getting close to explaining chapter 16. We now meet Sal and the last chapter explains why a hole is being dug for the pool. I still would like to know how Harry and Mr Jeffries meet. Maybe Chapter 16 needs to either be found as I'm sure CL wrote it but somehow grabbed the wrong chapter out of order. Just saying LOL.