CLJobe

I am an old man and when I read this story I realize what I might have had and didn't. I can see and feel the love between these two men. I suspect it reflects the love you had experience. Great job.

I would say you are off to a good start. I look foreword to following your story.

A great story with a surprised ending. I liked it and I tip my hat to you for another great story

Okay, I'm hooked

It's a cute story, well told. I'm sure its mimic's a lot of children in this world,. sadly not everyone will have a happy Christmas. Our prayers are needed for those unfortunate people.

What are my chances of getting those recipes. The food sounds delicious. It is a shame that gay couples can not enjoy the freedom os heterosexual couples. I enjoy this story as I have traveled a lot, as a single man and can appreciate the various cultures.

I have stumbled on these stories by accident. But I have read some of your other stories so as an author. I like your stories. This story involving Matthew brought painful memories for me. I think your inclusion and treatment of this young man is a reflection of your humanity. Thanks, I appreciated the way you have dealt with this. He was a loving man.

Good chapter, no great chapter. Somehow I had a feeling you would bring Lady Jane into the picture as a loving grandmother. Are you beginning to wind this story down?

An interesting chapter, I wonder what surprises you have planned for the next chapter. I'll guess a confrontation. maybe.

Looks like a good story, I look forward to reading the rest of this adventure.

I hope future chapters will let us the Australian Agents were all about. G'day

tough man

Do I note a little sensitivity in your responses. good story.

Some loves are hard to replace, one needs to be thankful for memories, even sad ones. We are not meant to be alone, we are by nature needing love that can only be given with a true heart. Do not give up let not your loneness guide you, look with caution and use your head not your heart.

Great story, well written. You are a master at keeping the suspense building. I'm amazed at how much history you have included in your story. Good job, looking forward to reading more.