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Sani

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  1. I need to stop getting so attached to characters with a high risk of not making it... I think I nearly cried when Bridge passed out and Star and Sacha freaked out. But he's just so easy to get attached to... But regardless, the tension of the situation is what's keeping me glued to my chair: I always need to check to make sure he's alright!
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    The Fall

    thanks for the reviews! I was actually just thinking about re-doing parts of the story in the last few days, since it was all kind of scattered and incomplete. I hope that, since this is my first time writing, it will get better with more experience, and reviews like this that help pinpoint my errors.
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    Chapter 1

    okay... that kinda confused me a lot. and freaked me out a whole lot more. But I think that's the strength of your stories; they keep the reader on the edge of their seat the entire time. I can never really tell what direction they're going to go, and it's exciting.
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    Fallen

    Veritas is an angel, long banish by the hands of a human. Kain, a human with power who can't seem to keep a relationship because of it. Will things work this time, or will centuries of bitterness keep the Fallen at bay?
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    The Fall

    Veritas And thus began my time on Earth. I hit the surface at a speed that would have torn a human to pieces, but I don’t remember any pain; only numbness. I must have stayed in that small crater I’d formed for hours. Luckily, I fell in a well forested area, far enough away from any roads or towns that might attract mortal attention. It left me plenty of privacy to stew in my misery over the loss of my home. At that moment, I wished more then anything that I could die,
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    the Decieved

    Veritas~ A man wandered among the gleaming gates of Heaven for decades, never once approaching the entrance to what was once called a floating paradise. I had seen wandering spirits like his before, though, so I paid him no mind. I figured he’d just needed to come to his own peace like the rest of them. They all needed at least a little time. When he finally did come to the Gate, though, I never expected what he did. As I said, it had been several decades since his soul had pass
  7. My group of friends has always been the touchy-feely type, and it carried over to my relationship, I guess. and, it's much easier to get away with when there are parents in the house.
  8. HI! the friendly neighborhood Sani is here to brighten days and wreak havoc, so just thought I'd give everyone fair warning.
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