Endymion1978

If this actually work, can we get the same reviewer for Duncan Ryder and CP Lydon please!

I’m not a writer and English is not my mother tongue so please bear with me ;-). After reading the review and most of the comments here, I have a few comments; I love Dom, I think he’s a great author and I’m one of those constantly checking to see if he has resurfaced, but I digress. If you’ve read all of Dom’s stories posted here, you have to realize the common subject is teenage angst therefore you can’t complain about the plot having too much of it; remember your teenage years people, where a minuscule pimple was the end of the world or when that guy (or girl) you had a crush on and suddenly you were walking on cloud 9! It’s a stressful period and I think Dom makes a superb job at describing it. On the other hand, as someone mentioned, the things happening in Rory’s life were very serious, more so for a teenager, so please give him some leniency. Now don’t mistake me, I also wanted to strangle him at times but, as someone else pointed out, the fact that you become so enraptured in the plot that you actually got to feel something while reading is testament of Dom’s talent. Someone mentioned there were few sex scenes; I personally prefer few sex scenes and a really good plot. This is not my favorite story, I’ve read The Ordinary Us several times but, if the reviewer thinks Rory’s angst was too much then, he/she will hate Quinn from the start! Now on that line, can someone tell Dom that we his legions of readers are waiting for him? Three of my favorite authors (besides you guys & girls of course), are MIA! L

I really liked Bran

This story needs to be read slowly and carefully to savor every Word. Personally the three asterisks used to separate each scene personally mean

I love Xander’s persistency and the way he CAN read Max’s tiniest emotion. That, I think, it’s exactly what Max liked about him because there he had someone who was interested, who paid attention and from whom he could not hide. I think at least now Sam is starting to realize he is attracted to Max. That single caress from Chapter 6 has a lot of meaning.

I don

I guess I like the three guys but my favorite is Xander. Dear poor Xander who was warned, but you used a phrase that explained it all "Sam's calling, nobody else exists" I can

May I come in?

Well Duncan, you did it again, an excellent chapter and you

I liked Milo from the start; I can

I voted for Jame as being the one who outed Nelson. He may be complex but he also seems to be jealous and to be holding quite a grudge against Nelson and his friends (maybe well deserved?), however I think he ultimately cares about Milo and he'll try to protect him. I don't think Mr. Trust would take the time to go to a high school just to out Nelson, doesn't seem to me that kind of guy, not because he's a saint but because he seems to be too self-centered and focus on his job. On the other hand hahaha I voted for Juanita! Because she cares about Milo and though she seems harsh, I think she'll do whatever to see him happy. Regards!