NoxNoctixLupus

Also in some families, especially with struggling parents making ends meat, there are teens out there that do work and help with bills. As you can see though this isn’t the case but it is very real and does happen as noted above.

haha hey! get out of my mind you! I love how you put neil and jake in your list and i'm surprised that scott is before tristan when most are going after tristan atm. And i love long reviews! you don't have to apologize for it! I love reading them! Thank you for it

haha hey! get out of my mind you! I love how you put neil and jake in your list and i'm surprised that scott is before tristan when most are going after tristan atm. And i love long reviews! you don't have to apologize for it! I love reading them! Thank you for it

thank you for your review :3 and yes, I am very mean to him....x3

I LOVE your review. Literally, I was smiling the whole time. You are the FIRST to bring up what could Neil possibly be. It will be explained more little by little in each of the following chapters I assure you. As far as Scott goes, yes, he is a bit sick. Scott is very sadistic and because of his pas also has several other mental issues. Like the little man syndrome on some cases. You have really put some thought to it and I love that! it's exactly what I look for! Hahaha I do love how you asked that question of wovles believe in cars. Because most run on instinct, its what they do from that. However, I have tried to implement some 'car' action lol. With that though, One cannot just shift, yank clothing and steal a car without money, so there is a little bit of logic in that. and yes, Gabriel though he's young and been through shit does have some human common decency on learning others, especially the person that actually helped him through his years of coming out since he could have quite possibly killed himself if it hadn't been for Tristan. You're point about Gareth is a good one, and though I would consider it TMI, I will share that no, that jarkla didn't make it. It wasn't that Gareth failed, it was that she had failed. As far as the multiple guardians go, as I beleive I explained it, it was because of them being a mated pair. Ahhh yes, the Xais. this thing just came to me hen I decided to add him in. Though he is BREIFLY mentioned, you most likey might not run into him again....or will you? I'll leave it up to how the story goes hmm? As far as the hunters planting anything, they know nothing about Luke and what he is. Unlike Jarklas, Xais are not a single form. There can be many. But lets just say Luke has his own little future. That is another story. And gabe can lack common sense. Sadly he gets that from me, yes I do talk to myself outloud and it definatly causes people to stare. it adds more "omg you're stupid" little puns to when he's in public places cause the things I could do with that is endless. He'll learn, and who knows, I might have Scott smack him upside the head later for that. And I am sorry for making you all way so long! I really am. ut I am military and things change all the time for me and I can't simply sit and type. Though this year is looking up! Here's to a better year and I thank you SO MUCH for taking your time to write this review. Please ignore my spelling errors, i'm hyper off coffee.

lol i do appreciate the input thank you :3

i do actually, and I have seen them when i go through, I plan on fixing it more and such. sorry for it being difficult and thank you.

haha it would have been easier wouldn't it? then were would he be hmm?

haha it would have been easier wouldn't it? then were would he be hmm?

haha it would have been easier wouldn't it? then were would he be hmm?

Scott didn’t want to do it. He hated even thinking about it. He went back to another home that Tank owned and brought only a few of the members inside. He walked in, still in lupine form as young Neil ran to the alpha and began to cry. He picked up the boy only to feel something wet on the boy’s thigh. “What the…” He murmured as he pulled his pawed hand back. On his dark grey paw pads was a dark red liquid. Was Neil bleeding? Heather went to him, whining. “Alpha, he just started to bleed there

Excellent point on that :3 thank you for the feedback

Excellent point on that :3 thank you for the feedback

Excellent point on that :3 thank you for the feedback

Excellent point on that :3 thank you for the feedback

haha it is fun to get those two interacting isn't it? The tough part is how others react to it. Thank you for your feedback :3

I know it does seem like it's starting over doesn't it? I think you will like what will happen in the later chapters between the two. Thank you for the feedback :3

Come to find out, Scott had broken every wall in his house either with his fist, throwing others into them, or kicking them in. Just in the short few hours before sunset, Gabriel was able to get the man to spill it; surprised he even got that far and almost decided to stay out of the room come nightfall. No good. Scott ended up picking him up like a sack of potatoes and walking right upstairs to the bedroom. He threw the teen gently on the bed. “Stay in here.” There was no please, not even a qu

Hard grey eyes met solid hazel. Gabriel struggled to sit back up but Scott grabbed him and rolled on top. He’d felt it. He’d felt the intrusion and was quick to respond. How did he do that? Scott was growling but Gabriel was staring at him like he had just realized something. Scott was judged by his outer looks, just like Gabriel’s parents had judged him simply for liking guys. Orion had judged Gabriel just as fast when the two met. “Wait, stop please I can explain,” Gabriel choked out as the m

I try to be as real as possible, and it's good that you are holding onto them being together(Tristan and Gabey boy)

-snickers- ah ha! someone is already brewing the thought on who his daddy is. good on you. and I actually was tempting that between Trent and Gabe...but decided against it for now. Glad you like the build up x3

-falls over laughing- wow Orion just got all jaw dropped at your review there. hahaha had to pat him and send him on his way. Yes, Orion does have a few issues but you are just a third of the way in, just wait. -giggles- Thank you for the review :3 always makes my day.

Yes yes I know, I', horrible..<.< but I do it within reason!

He hadn’t bothered counting the days he had been in the room. He was pretty sure a few days had passed and he might have been in there for a week. Heather would come in, clean his sad excuse for a bathroom and feed him three times daily. He didn’t bother talking to her, but he did try to read her. With the constant practicing he did with Seren, he was finally able to pin point thoughts during his meditation. He could feel the emotions of the wolves even more because of it. It was a whole new exp

not sure why >.> i'm just mean to him x3 just wait...justtt wait...