NoxNoctixLupus

Also in some families, especially with struggling parents making ends meat, there are teens out there that do work and help with bills. As you can see though this isn’t the case but it is very real and does happen as noted above.

haha hey! get out of my mind you! I love how you put neil and jake in your list and i'm surprised that scott is before tristan when most are going after tristan atm. And i love long reviews! you don't have to apologize for it! I love reading them! Thank you for it

haha hey! get out of my mind you! I love how you put neil and jake in your list and i'm surprised that scott is before tristan when most are going after tristan atm. And i love long reviews! you don't have to apologize for it! I love reading them! Thank you for it

thank you for your review :3 and yes, I am very mean to him....x3

I LOVE your review. Literally, I was smiling the whole time. You are the FIRST to bring up what could Neil possibly be. It will be explained more little by little in each of the following chapters I assure you. As far as Scott goes, yes, he is a bit sick. Scott is very sadistic and because of his pas also has several other mental issues. Like the little man syndrome on some cases. You have really put some thought to it and I love that! it's exactly what I look for! Hahaha I do love how you asked that question of wovles believe in cars. Because most run on instinct, its what they do from that. However, I have tried to implement some 'car' action lol. With that though, One cannot just shift, yank clothing and steal a car without money, so there is a little bit of logic in that. and yes, Gabriel though he's young and been through shit does have some human common decency on learning others, especially the person that actually helped him through his years of coming out since he could have quite possibly killed himself if it hadn't been for Tristan. You're point about Gareth is a good one, and though I would consider it TMI, I will share that no, that jarkla didn't make it. It wasn't that Gareth failed, it was that she had failed. As far as the multiple guardians go, as I beleive I explained it, it was because of them being a mated pair. Ahhh yes, the Xais. this thing just came to me hen I decided to add him in. Though he is BREIFLY mentioned, you most likey might not run into him again....or will you? I'll leave it up to how the story goes hmm? As far as the hunters planting anything, they know nothing about Luke and what he is. Unlike Jarklas, Xais are not a single form. There can be many. But lets just say Luke has his own little future. That is another story. And gabe can lack common sense. Sadly he gets that from me, yes I do talk to myself outloud and it definatly causes people to stare. it adds more "omg you're stupid" little puns to when he's in public places cause the things I could do with that is endless. He'll learn, and who knows, I might have Scott smack him upside the head later for that. And I am sorry for making you all way so long! I really am. ut I am military and things change all the time for me and I can't simply sit and type. Though this year is looking up! Here's to a better year and I thank you SO MUCH for taking your time to write this review. Please ignore my spelling errors, i'm hyper off coffee.

lol i do appreciate the input thank you :3

i do actually, and I have seen them when i go through, I plan on fixing it more and such. sorry for it being difficult and thank you.

haha it would have been easier wouldn't it? then were would he be hmm?

haha it would have been easier wouldn't it? then were would he be hmm?

haha it would have been easier wouldn't it? then were would he be hmm?

Scott didn’t want to do it. He hated even thinking about it. He went back to another home that Tank owned and brought only a few of the members inside. He walked in, still in lupine form as young Neil ran to the alpha and began to cry. He picked up the boy only to feel something wet on the boy’s thigh. “What the…” He murmured as he pulled his pawed hand back. On his dark grey paw pads was a dark red liquid. Was Neil bleeding? Heather went to him, whining. “Alpha, he just started to bleed there

Excellent point on that :3 thank you for the feedback

Excellent point on that :3 thank you for the feedback

Excellent point on that :3 thank you for the feedback

Excellent point on that :3 thank you for the feedback