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It was going exceptionally well, more-so than Seren normally would have thought. Gabriel was a fast learner, and with only one day of major headaches as he’d warned him, the following day had no side effects. The teen still struggled to say ‘Master’ at times to Scott but tried to make up with frequent kisses and sly touches. It seemed to work as Scott now would leave for longer periods of time and Gabriel would be by himself in the large room. During daylight hours, Gabriel would stand next to t
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Too Close for comfort
NoxNoctixLupus commented on NoxNoctixLupus's story chapter in Too Close for comfort
I did feel like he needed someone x3 though Seren will be getting on his nerves later on lol then again dont all voices in your head? -
He hated being held by him. Gabriel couldn’t sleep well with Scott’s arms wrapped possessively around him. His eyes were wide open and at times he would zone out completely as if he were sleeping, but not once could he. When absolute exhaustion won over, it was the only time Gabriel would even get close to sleeping. But after a few hours, he would awaken again in the arms of the tyrant. He never thought he would miss the comforting arms of Orion, but after a single night in Scott’s bed and the i
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The League of Wolves
NoxNoctixLupus commented on NoxNoctixLupus's story chapter in The League of Wolves
lol, Yeah, i do like doing a lot of character development which you'll see moreso from basically everyone. as far as who will become guardian, honestly it's up in the air x3 i'm still figuring that out myself. -
The League of Wolves
NoxNoctixLupus commented on NoxNoctixLupus's story chapter in The League of Wolves
I do try to accomplish that to be honest x3 and glad I can keep you on your toes! Though I have introduced the hunters, trust me when I say there is a much MUCH bigger picture that will lead onto the second book. I wont ruin it for ya though x3 With Tristan, you are defiantly not the only one that has noticed him being kinda ‘shoved back’ but Tristan will be making a full on come back later on down. Your reviews actually help in a choice on who becomes Gabe’s Guardian cause I will be honest, I don’t know who to PICK! I’m like on the fence with all of them, so reviews especially help the odds of each individual. As far as Neil goes, yes, the age thing does hurt his chances, but with me there is always a surprise around the corner ;]. For those who are wanting more Tristan, I promise to do a chapter fully on him, sound fair ? it’ll be present but kinda past. Hell might be kinda long (so noticed the chapters are getting longer) heh, surprising that the boat can have this affect on me. I just hope it continues when I get home. I will say I finally thought ahead and I hope you go nuts when the ‘Jarkla’ begins to really ‘Shine’ from Gabe. You are going to be rolling in the upcoming chapters, just no shooting ok? X3 -
i will be honest, I definatly forget about the time lasps. i have to catch myself at points x3 as far as questions go, those are a lot that will soon be answered. as far as the bond between Tristan and Gabe, it will be explained much later on down the road. so all the questions you have will shortly be answered. As far as the constant twists and turns I make Gabe go through, he is a teen, and even teens tend to forget about lifelines. I did enjoy reading your review and it made me smile a lot. I'll take in account all your questions and hopefully later on down I can answer them all, since you do make a great point on it. Thanks so much for the review! and sorry to keep you up so late x3
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xD i do have to say, I'm proud of Orion's character.
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lol yes -pets Orion- and thanks :] i just liked the concept of it, though I have to say, took forever to even think of a name to be honest lol
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“The League of Wolves had begun in the 1800s.” Leon began as Orion and Tristan took their seats, other members of the pack making their way in as they sat down and listened to the old wolf speak. “It had started down in Mexico when the Alpha of the Southeast made an agreement with the Central Alpha.” “What of the Valley of Mexico?” Leon looked at Orion when he popped the question. “The Central Alpha’s brother was in charge of the area during that time but had given allegiance to his brother du
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*One Week Earlier* The hours of the full moon were coming to an end, and Orion had gone back empty handed. He was devastated that his brother was able to capture Gabriel. What bothered him was that it wouldn’t have happened if Jake and Jason had listened to him. Maybe he should have had Gabriel out with him. He would have been able to protect him. When the sun rose, Orion sat outside on the lawn chair, naked as always after the full moon. Tasha and Trent looked to their alpha and saw his depre
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thanks so much x3 glad you like it ~Carmen
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His eyes were closed, but he couldn’t get away after thinking about Neil and everything that was intertwined. He tried going back into the Meadow. However, something happened that kept him from going back. Gabriel was starving, in constant pain and his focus was shot. His head would pound and his body shook. He ended up grabbing the blanket off the bed and wrapping it around him, fighting the pain of his shoulder, still dislocated from days earlier. He couldn’t find tears anymore, they failed t
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So many questions went through my head as I sat there with the previous Jarklas. They all seemed so keen to listen, to watch me. Eli, who sat next to me, was just sitting there, waiting for me to ask a question. I didn't know where to start! Taking a breath, I decided that maybe, again, I should start at the beginning. “Okay, well I understand that when we turn 18 that we must bond with our guardian. I know that we can dismiss our guardian before the bond. Then there's also the one where
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He wasn't sure how many days had passed where his eyes were glued on the floor and his body was ridged and rugged from the takeover. All he knew was that when they finally reached the house where Scott resided, Gabriel was roughly thrown into a very small room. The poor teen was overcome by complete darkness and terror. Even with Jake there, Gabriel felt completely empty. The younger teen had tried everything in his power to keep Gabriel comfortable but with Scott’s constant attention and his pa
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Tristan stopped to take a rest near the side of the road, his tongue rolling out as he panted some. He moved from the road and continued down south, the hot sun starting to affect him. ‘I need to just get there,’ he thought to himself, knowing he had to get down to Arizona as soon as he could. Maybe if he ran the whole way it would work. Taking a breath, he went for it. It would take days, but Tristan knew Gabriel was worth it. He’d always be worth it. The day ended
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The ride there was pretty wild, at least to Gabriel. He sat in the middle between Jason and Jake who continued to bicker on who was better looking, Megan Fox, or Michelle Rodriguez. Gabriel had shrunk in his chair when Orion had butted in saying that neither one of them beat Ali Larter. Then it just erupted into a huge conversation. Tasha periodically glanced back at Gabriel, mixed up in the whole ordeal of who was hotter than whom. After they got there, they got out of the Honda accord and Jaso
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Tristan rested in the soft patch of grass next to the two survivors of Scott’s ambush. The blood crusted on their fur, rendering them unable to morph into their human states. He was sure his mother felt the tear when her mate had perished at the paw of Scott. Tristan’s eyes opened to see the sun shining brightly overhead. He must have passed out completely. It looked to be noon or possibly an hour or two after. Lifting his head up, he looked to his brethren who stared at him with large eyes. He
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You will recieve more. I am still writing it, don't worry love ^__^ By the time i get some chapters on you'll be playing catch up
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lol, you're the first to say that. I have many plans for Gabriel, and yes I am in search of an editor and making progress and being helped with it. When i get feedback, all mistakes and errors will be updated regarding which chapter they are in. I add in the remarks when I edited it.Orion's always been there for his kind, even if he can be a dick sometimes. Scott does need to die, and I will have fun with that and I think you'll enjoy it as well.(i'll probably have to high light it cause it's cross the teen into mature possibly)The whole concept behind this story has changed and right now it's a debatable fact that i might change it into a series. Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate the time you took to write it
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The messenger stumbled into the house that his alpha owned, blood spilling from his still open wounds. He panted and gave a whimper when he heard the echo of footsteps walking down the spiral staircase. His eyes dared to look up at his alpha. Scott stood before the injured male, staring down at him. “Alpha, he saw us coming, and he had the Jarkla on his back, we didn’t know how to react. He killed everyone but me. He’s moving the pack.” His words were breathless but Scott saw no
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I sat in the meadow for what felt like hours, thinking and trying to really paint the full picture on what would happen. What could I do to get out of the situation, what would happen, the cause of my choices. Ever single scenario that went through my head ended up either badly for me or for Neil. It was coming down to if I could even take the pup with me. Would it even be safe to? There was no way I could protect the pup like the others could. He would be better off with the pack, and I could r
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Orion had believed he hit a home run when Gabriel had started opening back up, but the following day, everything just got worst. Orion woke up and Gabriel had shoved himself back in the corner. Hoping that when he left, the teen would move, proved no such luck when he peeked above the ladder to see Gabriel still in the same corner. The teen had completely shut down that day. Orion spent the day organizing their packing and went across to where he kept his vehicles. Opening the dusty garage, Tren
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Scott rested in his large bed with several females curled around his body until his peace was interrupted by a smaller male, bowing deep. “Alpha! A new Jarkla has been born.” Scott beamed up and smiled, shoving all the females away. “Oh lovely! Do tell me about it my pet,” he purred, sitting on the edge of his bed and smirking at the other man who kept his body bowed. Scott had long dark black hair with hard gray eyes, his features sharp and pointed. His body howeve
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Tristan smiled when he saw Deception Pass Bridge. Finally he was close to home. He walked over the bridge, passing many tourists in the area as he moved through them easily. He smiled wider when he saw his brother resting near the end of the other side. “James!” he called, his brother looking over to see Tristan walking over. He was smiling and ran to meet his brother, both trapping each other in a hug. When James glanced around, in hopes to see the Jarkla with his brother, his fe
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Gabriel, for most of the day, spent time with the pups and Neil until Orion had woken up around dinner time. He at first was worrying when Gabriel was nowhere near the barn, but relief caught him when he found the teen near the small creek helping the babysitters bath the pups. Neil, who ended up loving the water, was giving the teen a hard time when he tried to get him out of the water. “Neil come back here I have to dry you off!” Orion heard him exclaim, the boy stripped down to
