Good afternoon,
I've read the whole story in two sittings since I just found it. I truly enjoy the nature of Jake throughout this story. On one hand he's X and on the other he's Y. Insert paradoxical descriptions as they apply. I truly like the direction the relationship is going. I know some people have deep feelings for relationships that don't 'conform' and I don't mean gay ones. I hope the story plays out organically as the writer has allowed it to develop. Brett, Corey, Jake all have moved and grown in some ways - certainly off page in some cases since Jake is our window into the story.
This has been a gripping read and I can't wait for the next part.
