jeremy675

What an excellent story! It just sucks that we tend to take things out on those we love the most...Somebody needs to slap Peter up side the head (no pun intended) and get him straighened out soon. I know that recovery takes time but abusing the one that you love is not the answer. It starts with mental and emotional abuse (Peter's insecurities about Jason's family's money, and his inability to deal with it like an adult) then manifests into the more sinister version of physical abuse (almost rape, extremely rough sex to the point of not enjoying it by one partner). Jason needs to put his foot down and stop it before it gets worse, enlisting the help of Peter's teacher and family (especially mom, perhaps dad as well) will hopefully get the results Peter needs to become a functioning human being again. Sorry for the rant but I'm really connected with these characters and only want what's best for them, I know we only have a few (four) more chapters left and I'm praying that they end up getting things worked out so that they can live happily ever after! Thanks for writing this great story!

Great chapter!!! Can't wait for the story to continue! I sorta wanna beat Jacob's ass...I have a feeling that the price paid for drinking the green potion was the taking away Ho-o's help and giving Jacob the ability to absord all of her power without killing him...It's just a guess but I also believe that the dead guy, Lord whatever, wants to get the sword(spoken of by the seer) in the vault beneath the city(crystal prison). By killing Adam, Jacob will have all of the power of Ho-o at his disposal, with that power, I can see Lord whatever(sorry cant spell his name, but I really don't like him) taking over control of Jacob's body and stealing the sword... I am sad about the death of Brian but anticipated it through Adam's visit with the seer...I think I might have been a little more saddened by it if Adam and Brian's relationship had been fleshed out a little more...I just didn't feel the emotional concection with Brian that I do with Jacob(even though Jacob deserves a good flogging for being a dick...lol) Like I said, I really have found this story to be very good and can't wait for the continuation! Keep up the good work, and thank you for posting this where avid readers like myself can read these types of stories!!!!