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chip321

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  1. chip321

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    all these comments should be prompts for a very interesting story.......
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    good intro chapter
  3. Don, thanks for the tips, I can't count the times I start reading a wonderfull story just to be turned off by never ending paragraphs and unrealistic vocabulary used by the characters. I have printed up these rules to post above my computer to follow as a reminder thanks chip
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