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oh oh trouble. The courts are damn biased as hell if you are married and rich and christian you hardly gets visits, like the damn court know how to raise children i believe the child should have a vital say. very interesting scence in the gym but why is every one so blaise here about that i find it strange in a way oh well its fantasy. Great chapter by the way i am really enjoying this .

well sad life brandon had for sure, i am kindda wondering if something will happen on this night ride, i find the soul bond to be not without free will after all brandon isn't all empty like lol.

well i feel cheated yet relieved how stranged its like being raped but liking the feeling lol. i really want him to be properly trained even if dark 'cause i agree knowledge is not good or evil its how one uses it that matters. Brandon being here is totally unexpected and i'm not sure exactly how to take this well all the same very interesting and plotted excellent.

somehow i had a strong feeling something was not right with tom the whole coming up to ride and it was confirmed when he said lets check out an abandoned mine like really, really if that does not ring bells in your head i don't know what will. lol. well a t least he will get training lol not funny. hmm what will become of him is his uncle behind all this i am a bit worried since this is a dark genre i am not accustomed to i am in dread.

interesting chapter that darkness in him is troublesome at best and damn scary if you ask me. i hope he can get the help he needs. and isn't he breaking his aunts rule of no sex in the house

disturbing but a well written story i normally don't read dark stories i am kinda creeped out to tell the truth...shudders. But i am intrigued all the same strange.

the cats out of the bag things are getting excitable like the slow warming of molecules in a jar. REligious people are always a pain in the but when they are fanatics sigh...is like if i am going to hell and missing out on heaven at least please let me enjoy earth...a little bit.

i still find it hard to believe that he still doesn't realize that it is not his imagination yet but the plot thickens lol, great chapter i am wondering about the scratches as well it seems to tip me off about something not being rite but we will see.

well Hamen its not that the story is sad per say its just that i wasn't all happy, its basically my fault i am so empathic i cry when i am happy even lol i don't mind a good cry lol. Its just that i really get into a story and i really like adamagika so i got into it real deep, because it was so light hearted however when he ended up making the deal with the guy to save adam and all the things started to get a little too drama filled lol i really fell for him because i really loved him so is somewhat an underdog in the shadow of adam any way don't let me discourage you the story was very very well written your world as i said is just simply amazing Oh yes now i remember at that time i was going through an emotional period with my relationship so my emotion of hurt and change was superimposed on this story the fact that they were having problems kinda add to my stress lol, any way take that as a compliment that your story was so good that it had that effect lol.

as said prior excellent sentence structure and wording one is easily able to fall into the story, that in itself is amazing and makes your stories beautiful. But you also have a very vivid imagination and your worlds are enticing.

true the magics used here is pretty interesting and weird in some ways. I am now seeing how the black kings are able to do what they do so successfully. For example how the people got into haven to attack the heralds they must have railed up the common folks to turn against the nobles and the common folks had helped the people enter the city. As i always say human beings are capable of anything once their conscience is ok with it, all you have to do is excit people's righteous anger if anger can ever be that. Thats why i hate religion so much all though i am christian. The leaders rail up the people to make others lives miserable for example the buring of witches the catholic church wanted control over the world and they used the excuse that those Godless people were worshing demons and were the cause of plagues and whatnot and so to get Gods help we have to burn them and it was OK, watching a human being being slowly roasted alive. Isn't the same thing happening now the churches are saying that the crime and violence and disasters are being we have moved away from God and there is so much sin like the homosexuals so we have to make them miserable take away their rites get rid of them in other words and we can live happily on earth people are so selfish that they don't care as long they can be happy. lol i've said too much lol.

i must say i started to read this story and liked it a lot but i had not really dropped it but skimmed through the last few chapters after jacob's issue with the dark lord lol, i am a sucker for sad stories HC so although i really liked this story i could not bring myself to read the end especially as i thought it was the end i cried like a baby at the though that he was dead. I'm really an emotional mess really. I will have to read the end again. Did i say i hate sad things already. i just can't handle drama lol. the story was so sweet y did it have to take such a drastic end i mean i understand y sigh its just my poor little heart i can't handle sad things really well gets me depressed for a long time. But i loved the word you created one of the first stories i read here

well unto a new adventure, i wonder if he will get into the special room of the vale builder hmm aaching for more.

i think so as well about the mother. i am kindda angry at dalen on how narrow minded he is when dealing with his mother and about the whole getting chosen thing. He is slowly starting to piss me off.

yes a shame indeed, very weary of his mother but u think she is right in some ways the common folks are always restless

i am even more worried about the war and its reason and also that the enermy is black so to speak lol. but the story is progessing nicely so far

wondering what this war is about hope to find out and if the prince heir will die. Worried for out hero as well, very intriguing so far

its happening a little faster than i thought it would, pleasantly surprised.

absolutely amazing chapter, i am totally pulled in the story. I have been looking for such an awesome story plot for a while now its comparable to the other great stories on this site. I will look up more of your stories you have a superb writing skill reminds me of JK Rowling's Harry Potter the way she draws you in with her excellent writing skill. Looking forward to more of this story, i am amazed at how much i love this story already.

yes i agree with all of you awesome story and i am now reading it in 2012 can't wait for more almost as good as kandric so i of course want to read more. But sadly life happens of was said so we have to wait

AMAZING Chapter and story all together, I am new to The Kandric Saga so hello to every one here. Just WOW, while i don't like men boy sex, i can totally overlook it in this amazingly epic piece of art. A few days after i reached the chapter 27 on wolfsnest this chapter was posted thanks lol. I love the interaction of Kandric and Prince Rovanell though i wanted him to draw his sword so Kandric could beat him senseless. This chapter ties up a lot of things that was left loose in chapter 27 and earlier chapters. I am very interested in Aster's twin he isn't even named in the story yet. I also like Conner very much he really needs love, i am kinda pissed at Kandric's mom kaylaria too for what she did to Conner in a way she is like her father. I am wondering how may daughters Princess Kaylaria has, in the recent chapter Aster said he saw a couple of sisters and earlier on when Glandon or whatever the merchants name was came to the slums he said he saw Princess Kaylaria holding on the hands of two younger ones apart from the two older one that was made non children. But in ever other chapter that deals with the kids its always one girl the one Kandric fixed the doll for and when the overflow of dragon magic was talked about Vondum asked about daughter and not two so i am very confused as to how many children she has is it 7 or 8 is it one youngest or two ...sigh overall i really enjoyed that chapter i have already read it twice and i am new planning on reading it again sometime this week lol. LOrd i can't wait for chapter 29 can't wait.