tiatan101

What a gripping chapter, I saw the heartbreak coming, but didn't expect it so soon after him losing Alex for the trip. Hope they at least come to some conclusion, while it's not right that Derek actually kissed another guy, I hope it really didn't 'mean anything' to him like he said.( hehe totally see myself setting up for disappointment!)

Oh god, great ending, i can speculate so much from that last chapter, now I just gotta write it down so I remember it when you write the sequel *gets out pen and paper*. I'll be checking in to read what ever you write next, really like you as an author, cause you make sense (most of the time *wink*) , and have great ideas. Will keep in touch.

Oh Wow... that was unexpected, but now I'm bristling with questions. Really heart wrenching chapter, though Brian went out the way he wanted, saving Adam. Maybe plot twist coming later? Also Rye should have punched Adam for being so stupid (Brian was so much better for him), Jacob is turning out to be an ass Really great chapter though, can't wait for the next!

The chapters so far are very well written and easy to follow. I'm really liking the story so far and the interaction between the characters really grabs your attention. I am greatly looking forward to the next chapter to see how David and James continue on their journey!

Wow, what a roller coaster of emotions and plot twists throughout the story. Very glad I read this, it was such a great experience, i think i ranged from everywhere to loving to hating it then to loving it again. Overall great read, keep on writing!

Oooo, the ending of the chapter makes me itch to see what's gonna happen next. Keep up the great work!

Great story so far, couldn't stop reading once i started! Keep up the great work! Can't wait to see how the rest of the story plays out.