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    Next chapter we will see thar Charlie himself will contact Derek, maybe at Derek's house. But it is still hard for Derek to understand how to handle difficult social situations; after the talk with coach he has again the idea that he is THE man. And again we have to wait a whole week ;-(
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    Ch 20: Remorse

    DutchJoey commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 20: Remorse

    I have a very big soft spot for Derek and I think it is still growing. It took a lot of time and a understanding principal, and don't forget Mikee, to grow some insight in his own person. I think I must bribe Hamen to send me the next chapter on a short notice because I don't know if I can wait a whole week ;-)
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    I can imagine that it took an extra week to write this chapter although it feels as cold turkey. Mrs. C. is a formidable woman with a lot of love for this nearly perfect Derek. Looking forward for the next part (in a week please)
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    Ch 16: Mothers

    DutchJoey commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 16: Mothers

    This is the first time Derek is not so sure of himself, he is even frightened of Charlie's mother. I think the next chapter will be at least 3x as long as normal because of all that mrs. C has to say and all that Derek has to think about
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