DutchJoey

Glad you are back with this story. Don't let us wait to long with this cliff hanger .

That looks like a very sudden ending of this story! And also a very strange behaviour of the hero towards his friends. But I am sure you will solve all this for us. By the way: any news of Charlie?

I like this beginning with the special name Ng and a bit of the fameus British humour. Keep going.

I only recently started to read this story and have read it now in about a week. A completely different surrounding from most other stories with the horses. I really iked it and will be waiting for the sequel.

Welcome back, Hamen. It has been a long time after Charlie (how is he?). As expected a good start of this story, already looking forward to the next episodes.

Hamen, you should know that I still look every week for a new story by your hand, be it about Charlie or Adamagika. From your other comments I get the idea that you are working on something but when are you ready to publish?????

This chapter sounds very much like a very old English public school; I expect they stll use the cane ;-) Looking forward for the next chapter.

I've read now all the chapters in a short time and find it fascinating how weird and normal Elijah can be or maybe seem to be. Looking forward for all the next chapters.

This was a really emotional chapter, well written. I expect a lot more of these emotional things to happen. Looking forward for the next chapter.

A good start of this story and what a cliff hanger. Waiting for the next part.

They kissed and it was a real kiss, just what I wanted for Derek and Charlie And Charlie was in the lead, marvelous. This is a perfect ending for this story Thank you Hamen for this story with all its sad and happy and humorous parts. Now it will be waiting for your next story, maybe Adamagika II?

That really can not be, Derek dead. Luckily he is writing the story himself so next week we will see what happened after Derek closed his eyes and thought he was dead. This is the worst and the best cliff hanger you could think of, I suppose. Marvellous this part but nerve wrecking. For all your reader I think you must post the last part tomorrow if not within one hour.

nice story, putting us on the wrong foot through the title and then not a sad ending.

Just to say that this is a real nice story.

A rather short and easy going chapter....... until the end with a totally unexpected development: an until now unknown uncle. What will he do? Will he kill Derek's father? Will he bring big C en Hero together? When will the mad psychiatrist help Derek? Hamen, we will at least need two more chapters for all the developments that are needed before you can close this story with the Big Bang (Charlie and Derek together, kissing at least). Thanks again for this chapter.