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I was so happy when I saw that you had updated (and even more because I have totally forgotten that I didn't read the end to the last chapter so I didn't have to wait to see what was Jared doing there XD). I'm glad that we are getting to see more about Jared and that Jared is trying... I hope that the thing with Rebecca is just a misunderstanding I loved how Connor reacted to his apology and Jared wanting to get back together. I love how he is more confident and sure of himself. Hope you update soon! I hope that Connor confronts Jared after seeing him with Ronnie and this doesn't lead to much more drama

I had already said goodbye to the characters with last chapter but it was great to read a little more about them even if they just are mentioned. At the same time it was a good way to end the story and I would love to read the one-shot when you post it. Thanks for sharing such an amazing and beautiful story with us

Oh! I'm so happy right now I was so excited when I realized that you have posted the final chapter. I must admit that when I read the title... I almost loose hope and also when Jason was going to remember everything to try to let go. But I kept reading and then Jason read the note. I was so so happy and it was great what you did with it and the title For that reason, once I knew they could get together I was finally able to go and prepare dinner for myself. A part of myself didn't want to keep reading because I knew it was the end of Jason and Peter's story, but the other part wanted to know how they would get back and I needed to know Peter's motivations for acting like he did. When I tried to keep reading... something was wrong with the website... so I had to wait a couple of minutes more and then... I finally read everything and was so happy until the end. I'm glad that Peter explained to Jason what was going in his head since the accident. Everything made sense and I finally could understand why Peter was acting like that. It's great that Peter is now going to therapy and that now both of them are sure that the other loves them. Thanks for giving this story a happy ending (even if you made everything to made us thing that they wouldn't end together!). Sometimes things in real life doesn't work but sometimes they do! I'm so happy that things managed to work out for these two. There are so many things I would like to say but right now I'm not coherent enough to do it. So, I'm just going to tell you: thanks for writing such an amazing story and for sharing it here with us. I know will forever think that Jason and Peter will get old together and always in love And I also know that I will reread this story in the future more than once.

For some reason, this chapter made me think that things won't be so bad if Peter and Jason don't end together. I know now that Jason is going to be ok. However, I still hope that Peter decides that he is wrong and that he really loves Jason I'm glad that Jason still has his friends there for him and that Dean is also going to be there. I think that everything is pointing to a definitive break up between them (but if you do it I really really hope that you wrote a scene in which they talk about it and that Peter won't just be quiet about it forever). But! Like Jason, I won't loose hope.

Ohhh, this was really sad but real... I'm glad they were both honest with each other about their feelings. I feel so bad for Jason... I think that the one that still loves the other suffers much more. I wonder if this is actually the end for their relationship.

It was a good chapter. What's going on with Peter? Is all related to the accident? Will he get everything right before Jason decides that he can't take it anymore? Or is he the one that is going to break their relation? In this chapter Peter actually seemed really scared of Jason leaving him and sorry for how he acted but I don't think he is aware of everything that he has been doing. He really needs help I really hope that they end together and that all your mysterious comments are not there just to make us more understanding of the idea that Peter and Jason won't end together. Ethan and Anthony breaking up made me think that you can actually make them break up I can't really wait to see how you decide to end this.

Oh... this was such a sad chapter. It makes me sad in a different way from when Peter was in the hospital or when they fought before that. I don't know what's going on with him. Is it something related to the 'accident'?Is he going to go to counseling? I feel so bad for both of them. Jason has to be there for him but at the same time he can't be there forever and endure things that he doesn't want to do. It's sad because I never imagine Peter doing something like that... it must have been hard for you writing all of that after so many chapters writing about him in a different way. I hope that whatever is wrong with him can be solved because his moods are constantly changing... and I know that if he was aware of how he is acting he would be extremely sorry. After all your comments I know that these chapters are going to be sad and difficult. And you are right, drama is necessary in stories. Drama is part of real life. I know that relationships doesn't work sometimes... but I really hope they manage to have a happy ending. However, I trust that you know what you're doing and the ending of the story is going to be the right one for it, even if it's a sad one. Hope you post the next chapter soon!

Oh, what I was guessing was true. His grandpa gave him the cars! But... now Peter is even more insecure. I can understand both of them but I feel really bad for Jason. I don't know if there's something he can do to make Peter really understand that he loves him no matter what. I can't really wait to read the next chapters!!!!

Great chapter! I'm glad that Jason's grandparents are so loving and accepting of him and Peter. And I it's great that his mom is also now aware of what it is important in life I like how they are a really nice family even if Uncle Raymond is terrible. It was nice to see that Peter reacted well to Michelle saying all those things... but I don't know what he was thinking when Uncle Ray said those things to him and Jason. And the will... I wonder what was the change.

I can finally leave you a review!!! I started reading Second Shot not so long ago, when there were 38 chapters written and I have been wating to leave you a review since the firsts chapters... but I had lots of problems getting an account in here. Since I began reading the first chapter I couldn't stop reading and I was kind of useless until I could finish reading everything. There's so many things I would like to tell you but I think that my words won't manage to express how much I have loved reading your story. I love Peter and Jason and all the other side characters. You write about them like they are real people and that's why I think I feel like I actually know them. Reading this story has made me smile, laugh and cry. Reading about Jason and Peter's insecurities, meeting Peter, coming out, Peter's stay in the hospital and dealing with the consequences of it has been an incredible experience. I'm glad that even if some don'tt accept them, they are now secure in their love and what they want from they lives. I must say that reading of their fight and then knowing that Peter has been beated up was extremely emotional and so sad. It made me think a lot of all those that have suffered similar things and made me wish that some day people can learn to accept others that are different from them. Some of the things you wrote made me think a couple of friends I have and all the hiding that they have to deal with just because there's still persons that can't understand. I feel like I definitely didn't manage to express how much I love this story and have enjoyed reading it. So I'm just going to end this review thanking you for writing such a beautiful and wonderful story and for sharing it with all us. (Sorry for any grammar or spelling mistakes you may find but English is not my native language )