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  1. xTony

    Paradise

    xTony commented on xTony's story chapter in Paradise

    Thank you so much for catching that! You're lovely.
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    Chapter One

    xTony commented on xTony's story chapter in Chapter One

    Did we just become best friends? The Untamed is just so excellent beyond words. It took me on a rollercoaster of emotions! I'm actually on like episode 3 of the anime right now. I held off on watching for the longest because The Untamed was so iconic to me. It's good so far! Hitchhiker's Guide has that kind of meta moments that I love. This story will definitely have similar tones at times. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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    Chapter One

    xTony commented on xTony's story chapter in Chapter One

    It's going to be a RIDE I'm glad you understand my love for their novels. I can't say enough good things about them. Scum Villain is one of the best thing's I have ever read. Grandmaster of Demonic Cultivation is top tier reading too! My Next Life as a Villainess! Iconic anime. Taste!
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    Chapter One

    xTony posted new chapter in Red Riding Hoodie

    I drew a red X through another paragraph. It was one of several other markings covering the once pristine manuscript. I turned the page, and thankfully it was the last. Hallelujah! My eyes read the final few paragraphs with incredible speed. The thought of finishing this convoluted novel invigorated my spirit. “What the actual fuck!” I spat the curse with so much venom that it was a miracle my coworkers weren’t barging into my office. I closed the book with force and glared at the four h
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    Red Riding Hoodie

    xTony posted a story in Fiction

    After one man dies in the real world, he wakes up to find he has transmigrated into Red Riding Hoodie, the worst novel he ever had the misfortune of reading. As he awakens, he's greeted by the Re: Life System, who tells him his "account" is now bound to the character Hal Schuyler, the original hero of the novel (who is petty and a huge asshole). He realizes he has to change the story to avoid being killed by the main character's sometimes friend, Alaric. But the System has other ideas, not allowing him to act too out-of-character to avoid derailing the plot.
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    Exodus

    xTony commented on xTony's story chapter in Exodus

    Thank you for sticking with it and reading it! Well now that you mention. I have writer's block on my book so that mean's I'll probably whip up a fun story to distract myself. That's very sweet. Thank you for reading
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    Exodus

    xTony posted new chapter in Reflecting Equation

    This was a nightmare. I wondered how Ryan and Killian were doing, but I couldn't grasp the strength to search them out through the destruction. My brother, with his broken wrists, met my eyes. Two princes of Atlantis, wrecked, on the ground and beaten. What a sight we made. This must be what the angels felt during the Last Great War. Victory was a longshot dream against an enemy that shrugged off attacks like a mild breeze. I was exhausted and tapped out. I suppose that was his plan a
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    "What do you think you're doing?" Halo demanded. "The Freeze is taboo. If you do this the universe itself will retaliate!" The Executioner studied the Voice of They Above All, warily. "What is he talking about?" "My brothers and I are here to oversee the freezing of the Earth," Celeste said, and she sounded honestly regretful. "An eternity in ice is this planet's future. It's the only way to keep Entropy imprisoned." I felt blindsided. This was a betrayal I never predicted. "What?
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    The procession that left the city of Atlantis was considerably smaller than the one that had entered it. Upon these quiet streets walked the Chosen, with Nathan and King Oriens at our side. It had been nine days since our arrival, and there were few on the streets to see us leave under cover of night. Those we passed left us alone to depart in peace. I felt rested and more at ease than I had in a long time. Being in Atlantis had soothed all the burdens and stress life had dealt with made me unde
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    I once read that you can never remember the beginning of a dream. I vaguely recognized this place from a distant memory that I couldn’t quite grasp. It was a flat, empty floor in some brightly lit space that nonetheless didn’t echo its emptiness as if there were no walls from which sound could reflect. It was blindingly white along with the ceiling, too, was bathed in an aerial ocean of illumination. I finally looked at the man across from me. He was sitting crossed-legged upon the floor
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    I almsot forgot about that name 🤣 Realllllly complicated
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    Homecoming

    xTony posted new chapter in Reflecting Equation

    If the sight of Atlantis hadn’t stolen my breath, then Kevin’s statement would have. I took a step forward and then stopped. Kevin smiled at my indecision, and I crossed the distance between us and threw my arms around him. I tuned out the murmurs of the crowd who continued staring about in abject wonder. “I missed you,” I said in something like a sob. He hugged back with matching intensity and laughed with nervous relief. “I always seem to leave you. Don’t I?” “Just keep coming back
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    Solaris was in no shape to transport us, so I created a portal that greedily sapped at my diminished reserves. The city wasn’t what we left. Centennial was a disaster zone. Clouds blanketed the sky and hid away the sun leaving the city in a dim shadow of gloom. Voidwalkers had come to Centennial, leaving death and destruction in their wake. There wasn’t a single person in the streets. Empty vehicles, abandoned and silent, filled the lonely roads. Shattered store windows were abundant up and
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    Oh wow. I didn't think people would read this. This story has been finished for over a year on Nifty. I just remembered I never uploaded the rest of the chapters here.
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    Adam was giving me the silent treatment. I’m not sure how I felt about that. I gave him a sweet smile and his glare intensified. Oh. He wasn’t going to let this go. I poked him on the shoulder. “You real mad, huh?” His eyes narrowed. I leaned back against the door of my car as the bell for study hall rang across campus. Technically, study hall was supposed to be spent in homeroom, but it wasn’t mandatory just as long as you stayed on school grounds. I squinted against the glare o
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    "Jesus fucking Christ!” Ryan rolled back on his mattress, doing this backward flip so he came up to his feet in a crouched stance. I blinked at him posed in the middle of his bed in nothing but a pair of old lounge pants and white undershirt. I slowly raised my hands. “I definitely told you I was coming. I didn’t imagine that, right?” Ryan rolled his eyes and dropped to the mattress. He sat on the edge and grabbed the blanket from where it had fallen on the floor. Ryan wrapped it tig
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    I hoped you enjoyed the ride! That was pretty much where I would take a epilogue. It wouldn't be long maybe 8 or 9k words, but it would be a proper send off. I have a tentative idea right now I just have to fine tune it.
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    Nifty has so many gems, but I definitely have gotten used to reading ebooks. The strain on the eyes and the software advantage is very relatable. Me and you are one mind on Stargate. It's favorite scifi show, but definitely had some unnecessary elements toward the later half of the series run. And I actually prefer the OG BSG version a lot more than the nuclear fallout in the new version. But Jamie Bamber definitely was the initial lure that drew me in.
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    Omg that reminds me I really should’ve linked these side stories. Yikes! I’m glad you found them. Sorry you had to play detective! I might get around (pretty sure I will) to an epilogue that deals with after the exodus. In it the faerie realms did manage to avoid the freeze. The ice didn’t breech their havens out of phase. In my head, the epilogue takes place in a future time with the group as adults and life in Avalon. There’s the tiniest glimpse in another short story (4 Ways...)z
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    Done and done!
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    Killian stared at the front page of the student paper and had to give himself props. On the front page was a large color 8x8 of the school’s cheerleaders in a perfect pyramid. A smirk crossed his face at the accompanying article. He skipped study hall and decided to take an early lunch just to bask in his own awesomeness. There were picnic tables scattered behind the library usually abandoned during lunch so he made ample use of the secluded spot. So it’s a surprise when he found the new
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    Yessir you see where I'm going with this
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    I have no idea why I never posted the interludes on Nifty. I have a couple more just sitting on my hard drive. They definitely deserve to see the light. I detect an epic romance incoming.
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    It took a lot for me to drag my ass up out of bed. Adam bribed me with kisses and Pop-Tarts, and I can’t lie, the second offer kind of did it for me. Adam called me a candy ho, but I already made peace with myself a long time ago. I ambled into the kitchen, eyes hooded and yawning. Mom stood at the counter, watching the news with a captivated expression. A glance at the TV showed footage from yesterday’s fight downtown. More than likely it was going to be replayed for the next month. “M
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    Excellent usage of old PR lore 10/10
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