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Everything posted by akisar61
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Yes I did. I had put it up but apparently it was overlooked and part 5 was posted and 4 was left out. Have put it up for posting again it should go up today.
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Part 5 Confrontation Jack Clarkson had a look of shock and embarrassment on his face as he tried to apologize for his wife’s outburst. “It’s alright Mr Clarkson,” the councillor said, “You don’t have to apologize for your wife’s foul mouth. Instead you should be questioning yourself as to how you allowed this pathetic excuse of a parent and yourself to neglect Timothy from any form of love or understanding, and subjecting him to the abuse that I gather he’s had to withstand all his life. N
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Part 4 Revelation The rest of the week went quite well for Timothy; Brian Hunter had returned to school but had not troubled him in any way whatsoever. Maybe the rumour that was circulating the school that Beardsley was going to take over the post of Assistant Head after the mid-term holiday might have had something to do with it. Old Mr Sinclair who would be resigning the post was a soft touch and the boys knew it. So when they went in front of him to be disciplined unless it was the most
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Part 3 Rejection The journey back to Kai’s house was a lot more comfortable. Besides themselves there were hardly any other passengers on the bus. He sat on the inside of the seat near the window wondering how he would be greeted by Kai’s parents, and felt that it would be better when they alighted from the bus that he made an excuse and went straight home. He was grateful for being taken out but felt he might be an embarrassment to Kai. “What’s up?” “Huh,” he responded his train of thou
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Part 2 Kai On Thursday Kai Webster after firstly reporting to the school nurse limped into the classroom followed by Mr Beardsley. As he went to his desk he looked in the direction where Timothy Clarkson sat and saw the desk was empty. Looking around he saw a few more desks vacant and noticed that the vacant desks were of Hunter and his mob. Realizing that something must have happened in the two days he’d been absent from school he leaned forward to question Collin Ross the nearest boy to hi
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C’est la vie (Say la Vee) Part 1 Timothy After working in the same job for the past twenty years Jack Clarkson at the age of forty five found himself unemployed. He was lucky enough after moving his family down south to find employmen
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My attempt at a limerick Lugh is the tech on this site He can tell if your stories not right With words that can burn Potential authors will squirm When told that their story is Shite
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Subject: 3D PRINTER Is This for real http://www.youtube.c...h?v=ZboxMsSz5Aw
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Part 4. With the customary greetings between the boys and adults out of the way Mr Anderson addressed his son, “Micah, seeing that your mother and I returned a bit later than anticipated it would be a bit too late for her to start cooking, would Luke and you like to come out with your mother and I for a meal?” Micah looked at Luke who nodded his head in response. “Okay Dad, but do we have to get dolled up or are we alright to go like we are?” “The two of you look alright, but your m
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Part 3 Micah rose from his bed. Grabbing his robe he put it on then turned to Luke. “You better put your underwear on and stay here. I’ll get us each a cup of tea and bring it up.” He made his way downstairs to see his father standing at the bottom of the stairs with a couple of bags in his hands. “Morning, Dad.” “Morning, Son, or should I say afternoon- it’s nearly midday.” “Sorry, we were up talking till quite late last night.” “Yes and if pigs had wings they could
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Part 2 The boy followed Micah into the house and the sitting room. Micah greeted his parents then introduced Luke to them. His parents welcomed Luke and asked him to take a seat. “It’s okay Mum, we’re going to the kitchen to get a drink and something to eat, we’ll be back shortly.” The two boys disappeared from view. Inside the kitchen Micah asked, “You hungry?” “Yeah, I haven’t eaten for ffu umm ages.” Micah smiled at the younger boys attempt to keep from swearing. “How about a p
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The Thief of Hearts. Part 1 His daydreaming was brought to an abrupt halt by a noise from downstairs. He rose from the bed and listened, and again he heard the noise. Micah Anderson made his way down the stairs as noiselessly as possible. First going to the kitchen he found everything in order. He heard the noise again, and this time it was definitely coming from the sitting room. Making his way stealthily to the room, he looked through the crack between the door and the doorpos
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A teenage burglar breaks into a house and discovers something that money can’t buy
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Dannsar Yeah now I remeber that bit, but do you know any other verses.
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This is all I can remember about The Good Ship Venus, add to it if you know others T’was on the good ship Venus Good God you should have seen us The figurehead was a whore in bed And the captain’s name was penis. Now the captain of this lugger He was a dirty bugger He wasn’t fit to shovel shit From one ship to another. The cabin boy was kipper He was a crafty nipper He stuffed his arse with broken glass And circumcised the skipper. The first mates name was Harper He was a musical farter. He could fart anything From God save the King To Beethoven’s Moonlight Sonata.
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sorry about the ending being a bit abrupt, but I was beginning to run out of ideas I should have stopped and had a think about it before concluding the story
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Glad you liked the story and thank you for your positive comments much appreciated
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Really nice to hear you enjoyed the story
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Sorry you had difficulty in following the story, will in endeavour to make any further posts more readable.
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Part 4 Fear the Redeemer When the bell went for end of classes the boys met up outside the school gates. David borrowed Billy’s mobile and called his father telling him he was going to Billy’s house before returning home. The boys waited at the bus stop along with numerous other pupils and when the bus arrived there was the usual mad scramble to get on and grab a seat. When they were seated facing each other Billy signed, “So what were you going to tell me about Jake?” David didn’t
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Part 3 Back to School Billy smiled and signed, “I still don’t understand David, what are you trying to say, could you please repeat it?” “Okay Billy I think this will make it clear,” and once again David lowered his head and brought their lips together, but this time as he did so he felt a hand at the back of his head holding him. David poked his tongue out only to be met with Billy’s, the moment their tongues touched their mouths opened and battle began. Their tongues went from mouth t
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Part 2 The Meeting He waited all through Saturday for a call from Jake but it never came. By 5.00pm he accepted the fact that Jake had found other interests and that it was futile for him to think that Jake might suddenly need his company out of school hours. Reluctantly he settled down to watch the box for the rest of the day. Sunday he decided to go out to the shopping mall just to try and get Jake off his mind. He walked around aimlessly not really achieving what he had set out
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The Quiet Boy Part1 The Dream He was fifteen years of age and waiting impatiently for the approach of his sixteenth birthday, which was due in four weeks time, when at that time school would be over and he would be free for six whole weeks for the summer break. When he could laze about the house, and not having the tedious task of having to be up by 7.30am Monday to Friday. He would be able to do as he wished within reason as long as he didn’t untidy the house too much whil
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A teenager who has lost his voice regains it in the most unexpected manner.
