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    Chapter 19: Sunscreen

    Harm commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 19: Sunscreen

    I love your writing style, ya building up thrilled me. It is really the most erotic story by now. But please don't move to fast, the building up is so awesome! The writing from blakes point of view is great, problems with his psych and to see a mirror of emotion on haze where really the best parts. Maybe its nice to get a bit more insight of Haze feelings and psych. Looking forward to the new chapter
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    Great story, your writing style is really good. It's more or less similar off what I have been throw last year, hopefully this story don't end that badly in the hospital as mine did. Looking forward for the next chapter
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