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Labrador

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  1. I would really appreciate some help with posting stories. I've added a story in progress, but have no idea how to add the next chapter. I am so lost.
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    Chapter 15

    I have to wonder, did Mishtar not have any idea that Ahsran was not on his side? It seems that he would be suspicious since he spoke about him running away in the video. Wouldn't that make it harder for Isiah for infiltrate? Or was he aware and using the infiltration as a way to gain a way into the government workings? Hmmmm... interesting.
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    Story

    Wonderful job, as usual. You give your characters such life, it's easy to see them as real. I love the way you kept the romance without them immediately jumping each other's bones, so to speak. So many stories don't take into consideration the actual feelings of both parties. I do hope that some time in the future, Benny's love is able to heal. They deserve to be together.
  4. Part 1 - Joshua If given only one word to describe her, I guess it would be, enigma. I didn’t understand what drew me to watch her. It wasn’t her looks, although she was beautiful in her own right. Five foot six, lean hour glass shape with full breasts, not too big and not too small, just enough for a hand full. Rounded hips that blended into a nice firm ass and long slender legs. I bet she’d be a great dancer. I could see her swaying seductively, changing in speed to keep with the bea
  5. When Joshua and Alex meet Jo, they are drawn into a world they never knew existed, and begin a search for a son they didn't know they had.
  6. I've enjoyed reading your stories, though, I am somewhat disappointed that this one hasn't been continued. Are there plans set to finish?
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    Chapter 10

    Now, how did I know Davis wasn't the one blocking the bond? Ah, the things we do to protect ourselves. Cia, you blow me away with the way you walk the fine line of reality and fantasy. It's not always an easy thing to do.
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    The Pearl

    Imagination is so much fun. This chapter would be a great prologue. Don't you think? You could go back to the beginning and how Aukai saved his life, then on to the decision made and future he now lives. Absolutely stunning in my mind.
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