Hawley
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Amazing story so far. The way the characters handled the full on Ardor was brilliant, it really showed who they are. Your characters are so fully realized and their actions true to who they are and how they have developed over the story. You written it in such a way that even though these are easily identifiable character "types" they aren't caricatures or cliches. Maraki has shown constantly he is an honorable and caring gentle giant who will stop at nothing to protect the ones he loves even if it means his own demise. My hope is that Elyran gets to a chance to show Maraki the love he has for him. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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Well looks like I'm a crow...a little disappointed by that. I think i'll ignore that and go to my second animal Owl. I love owls!
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Another amazing chapter. I love this world you've created. Better yet, you've filled it with such compelling characters. It's hard not to be drawn to Dav, he appears so strong yet at the same time he's so full of insecurities. I can't wait to see how Ellis and Dav's relationship evolves over time (subtext: please write more soon! )
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This is such an engrossing story! The way you've written Quinn he seems so real, you can feel his pain and confusion. I can't wait to see where Quinn and Cameron's relationship goes from here and I can feel the confrontation with Zach brewing.
