I created a user account here for the express purpose of following your story. This will be my first review, as well, to your story, Acedias. That is how connected I feel to your writing. Your descriptiveness becomes a force, an undeniable one, that refuses to let me free from constantly reminiscing about this story. Days, weeks, months after reading about Blake, the tiniest thing will evoke a memory or thought trail from your writing. I normally go for grittier fare, but this fiction reflects enough portions of stark, imperfect humanity that I don't mind the romanticism at all.
I used to grind my teeth in anticipation, I had it under control for a very long time.
Lately I've been chewing on things to compensate the urge to grind my teeth.
I think these urges to grind my teeth would dissipate if another chapter were to come soon.
Yesss?
